To Whom-

Let's sit together and talk like we used to. . .
when we were young; your voice was like a bass drum-
pumping through my brain. You were a white noise to
block out the rest of the world. 

I can never remember what we talked about but
I remember the silence when we expelled all our stories and fears.
Closer, you came, and I heard the sound of locusts flying-
their beating wings, drowning out my vision.

I was senseless and clung to you, stable and strong.
There was a deep rent in your soul- I saw it one day.
And for a moment, I fell in love with you. I felt strong
where you were weak.

I wanted desperately to be the one. Am I beautiful
enough? to fill the void, the gap, the space? 
When you look at me: you see my shell,
pretty and useless, with soft hands, soft lips. 

You never did find out if I was beautiful. We stopped
talking long before it ever came up. And I-
never healed the part of you I loved the most.
Where do we go from here?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Clemons Avatar
January 9, 2014 at 4:16 PM
Wow, deep honesty in this great poem, Daisy. The expression of happiness and sadness is created amazingly. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
Dome Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 1:44 AM
Nice write well done. best wishes. Pete.
Braun Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 9:33 PM
wonderful poem!
Melugin Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 9:36 AM
I stand amazed at your work! Can we ever possess the right to be loved? 7 stars
Goodman Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 11:38 AM
Oh, and thanks for your kind comments and rating! I really appreciate it. I'd love to read some more of your work, too.
Goodman Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 11:37 AM
I guess not- we can't ever posses the right to be loved. But it's so easy for me to love others, and that is enough.
Ranganawa Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 7:31 AM
good work! guess that why u r number one
Goodman Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 3:09 PM
Thanks for your comment.
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