Notes About The Poem

written 20/04/2024
10 to 12 syllables with aabb rhyme sequence

Premiere Contest WinnerTo which Image should we cling

mirror tells lies when it looks back at you,
image shown is which you already knew,
does not show your thoughts, wisdom, or feelings,
image not truth, however appealing.

the body you inhabit is your dorm,
your name is tag for the physical form,
the self is seeker searching for answers,
search tool is intellect with such powers.

your journey is not of the mind alone,
body ages, dies has no sins to atone,
sins are of active mind that deal with trials,
that deal with challenges and times betrayals!

the true journey is one deep within you,
a passive observer with clear view,
one not affected by any events,
it questions nothing, it makes no comments.

passive observer lives in each of us,
that is part of supreme divine pureness,
dwell in that passive mind to free the self,
past lives are mirages of memory shelf.

it was born the moment of our first cry,
stays with us till the far end when we die,
untainted, untarnished, piece of divine soul,
to merge with eternity, final goal.

your images of past are not images of you,
to such false identities bid adieu,
memories, relations are of physical,
eternal our presence, body ephemeral.
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Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 2:22 PM
Warmest Congratulations on your Trophy win, Dear Poet. This is a really spiritual, philosophical poem. You have expressed your beliefs with such depth!
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 10:47 PM
Thanks Mala! Lovely to have your remarks always! Much appreciate your kind words!:)
Crandall Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 12:15 PM
Very interesting poem Krish, body is just a dorm, and name is just a tag...false identities...
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 12:19 PM
Thanks David! This is my deepest belief! I think I am on my path to self realisation!????
Junaid Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 1:43 AM
WOAH. This is the truth that runs deep in our veins - this poem truly is a mirror. the real mirror. amazing. Much love - Hiba
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 18, 2024 at 9:25 AM
Hiba, Thank you very much! Much appreciate your supportive words!!
Poet Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 2:11 PM
The path you take in poetry reflects the path you take within. I believe it is relative to one's own background. Of course, your immediate surroundings and the larger community also have a role. Congratulations on your top win.
Radhakrishna Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 9:44 PM
well said!! so very true!! Thanks!! I totally agree! This poem reflects my deeper convictions.
Croft Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 11:38 AM
Congratulations,very intriguing poem!
Radhakrishna Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 1:44 PM
Thanks Karen! Much appreciated!!:)
Drowley Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 8:17 AM
Congratulations on your win! The mirror does lie, blocking the light that lies behind.
Radhakrishna Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 9:29 AM
Thanks David! Appreciate your kindness!
George Avatar
April 29, 2024 at 10:55 PM
"your images of past are not images of you, to such false identities bid adieu, memories, relations are of physical, eternal our presence, body ephemeral" . So very true. Our spirit is eternal and our body is ephemeral. A very profound poem written in beautiful rhyme. Hearty Congratulations Krish, on your trophy win.
Radhakrishna Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 9:30 AM
Thanks Valsa! Delighted to have your kind comments! Pleased you agree with my understanding of life.
Kaufman Avatar
April 20, 2024 at 1:50 AM
Dear Krish, Your poem reflects your spiritual path which I believe is influenced by where you are of course in the world as well as your personal journey. It's a very deep poem you have crafted and I enjoyed it. Have a blessed day.
Radhakrishna Avatar
April 20, 2024 at 3:28 AM
Dear Nancy Thank you for your very kind words! I am very lucky to have seen and travelled through all religions in some form or another. I have shared my understanding of it! Your valued observations mean a lot! Thanks once again.
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