To Walk Away

The shoes of a fool I've set aside
to walk away from traveled roads of clay
I thought were real
they led to trouble that would often stay
though sometimes had great appeal, an illusion

In these old shoes, I found gold
that shined for me,    a clown

its brightness burned a hole
that allowed reason to pour out 
onto the Mill stone of my mind 
and grind each kernel from my soul
separating the wheat from the chaff
leaving me beaten on its grinding wheel
where illusions made green bread

The foolish shoes I wore on a road of clay
I've changed, to a new pair
made from the dead skin of my scars
when I walked away

7/27/17 contest Two pair of shoes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dietrich Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 8:09 PM
I think the sponsor of this themed contest is really going to like the way you did your poem. Great extended metaphor , Frederic!
Sands Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 3:35 PM
Oh wow Frederic, this is a good one. Well done for the contest. :)
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