To: Vienna Bombardieri Yours Truly the Druken Poet

You are~
The queen of hive~keeping a universe of sweetness alive.
The richness of air~ more richness than a gem or bank can bare.
The float of a boat~the ink of a love note.
The warmth of a coat~the warmth of prevailing hope.

With a billion brilliantly buffed  stars you shine~a shine in the night of my mind.
You are the eloquence of glistening and glamorous Fiji waters~beauteous waves of mind.
A Unhurried dulcet substance steaming ahead~honey flowing through your veins.
I can visualize your golden veins,coiling on the
bars of heavens divine gates ~ your soul the key to heaven.
I'm  sure a blind man can see you, I'm sure women would love to be you~ I'm sure though I haven't seen you.

Perhaps I seen you in
the rose I smelled yesterday
the sun of today
the mystical formation of
comely clouds. 
perhaps I seen you girdled in 
trees of fortitude,may be you
are the the fortifier of it all,the
beautifier of all roses standing tall.

You are the first steps of a baby
that once use to crawl,supportive
to all.You are the benign tender of
a baby's BIRTH~


So go ahead ask me what your WORTH,
and yes baby people like you is the 
restoration of EARTH.


So go ahead ask me what your WORTH,
And i'll say YOUR  WORTH MORE THAN EARTH!!!

Your birth chained heaven to earth~
A visible but invisible cord the doctors couldn't Cut,

BUT guess what these words came from the heaven in my GUT!!!


Written BY: Elliott Bowe

TO: Vienna Bombardieri
YoUrs TrulY thE DruKeN PoEt
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
June 5, 2012 at 11:37 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement in Nikko's contest Elliott. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
June 4, 2012 at 12:18 PM
an excellent tribute to Vie here!cONGRATS on your win!!
Rozario Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 1:37 PM
Cool dedication Elliott...she's one of my favorite here on PS. Congrats on your win.
Onclaud Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 4:39 AM
liked this the first time around, elliott... sweet congrats!..:) huggs
Williams Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 2:30 AM
Elliott congrats on your win..David
K. Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 11:36 AM
This one really got me smiling, Elliot! I really enjoyed the flow and rhythm of this very lovely tribute to vie :D She is definitely one talented and lovely poet and so are you for writing this beauty for her :D Thank you so much for entering this in my contest and super congrats to you! :D
Green Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 2:48 AM
This is utterly amazing- keep it up!
Horsman Avatar
May 31, 2012 at 8:06 AM
thanks alot for my placement in your contest.
Horsman Avatar
May 31, 2012 at 8:05 AM
I'm catching up as usual, Elliott, i really like this, a brilliant poem in its own right, also a wonderful tribute to a wonderful lady. harry
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May 30, 2012 at 11:26 PM
Thank you all!!!
Williams Avatar
May 29, 2012 at 9:35 AM
Elliott a great poem to a great poet and lady..David
Murphy Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 12:15 PM
This is a master piece Mr Bowe! truely beautiful!
Cooper Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 10:47 AM
lovely dedication to a wonderful lovely gal!
Kendrick Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 5:01 AM
I am sure that Vie will enjoy this one..Very interesting closing..Sara..Thanks for stopping by..
Chircop Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 12:06 AM
Such beautiful words for a wonderful lady and great poetess... Lovely Eliott...Charma
Caulfield Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 3:29 PM
Wow, I wish I were her. Excellent Elliot. You sure know how to write poetry. Sometimes mine sounds like fluff.
Michaels Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 2:26 PM
I AM ALREADY A FAN! Thank you.
Song Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 1:09 PM
This is such a tribute, Elliott! And the ending is as sweet as spice! YOu got her down pat! She is a great poetess indeed!....Gwendolen
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May 27, 2012 at 9:25 AM
Nicely praised with poetic heart, loved and thank you for reading my write, always bl
Collins Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 8:37 AM
Elliott, This is so full of poetic turns. The second verse in particular is a dream. Sober or drunk. I responded to your lovely comment on my page. I'm not sure if anyone checks those or not. how did I miss you? love, Kathy
May Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 5:40 AM
this is a lovely and romantic.. well written..Joseph
Goff Avatar
May 26, 2012 at 10:49 PM
Very cool, original poem, Elliot! Jimbo
Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2012 at 9:46 PM
A beautiful poem for a beautiful lady. I too think she is divine!! She is a poetess in every sense of the word, and you are a wonderful poet!
Palmer Avatar
May 26, 2012 at 9:21 PM
well written
Situation Avatar
May 26, 2012 at 7:53 PM
enough said
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