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To: Vienna Bombardieri Yours Truly the Druken Poet

You are~ The queen of hive~keeping a universe of sweetness alive. The richness of air~ more richness than a gem or bank can bare. The float of a boat~the ink of a love note. The warmth of a coat~the warmth of prevailing hope. With a billion brilliantly buffed stars you shine~a shine in the night of my mind. You are the eloquence of glistening and glamorous Fiji waters~beauteous waves of mind. A Unhurried dulcet substance steaming ahead~honey flowing through your veins. I can visualize your golden veins,coiling on the bars of heavens divine gates ~ your soul the key to heaven. I'm sure a blind man can see you, I'm sure women would love to be you~ I'm sure though I haven't seen you. Perhaps I seen you in the rose I smelled yesterday the sun of today the mystical formation of comely clouds. perhaps I seen you girdled in trees of fortitude,may be you are the the fortifier of it all,the beautifier of all roses standing tall. You are the first steps of a baby that once use to crawl,supportive to all.You are the benign tender of a baby's BIRTH~ So go ahead ask me what your WORTH, and yes baby people like you is the restoration of EARTH. So go ahead ask me what your WORTH, And i'll say YOUR WORTH MORE THAN EARTH!!! Your birth chained heaven to earth~ A visible but invisible cord the doctors couldn't Cut, BUT guess what these words came from the heaven in my GUT!!! Written BY: Elliott Bowe TO: Vienna Bombardieri YoUrs TrulY thE DruKeN PoEt

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/5/2012 11:37:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement in Nikko's contest Elliott. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/4/2012 12:18:00 PM
an excellent tribute to Vie here!cONGRATS on your win!!
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Date: 6/3/2012 1:37:00 PM
Cool dedication Elliott...she's one of my favorite here on PS. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/3/2012 4:39:00 AM
liked this the first time around, elliott... sweet congrats!..:) huggs
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Date: 6/3/2012 2:30:00 AM
Elliott congrats on your win..David
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Date: 6/2/2012 11:36:00 AM
This one really got me smiling, Elliot! I really enjoyed the flow and rhythm of this very lovely tribute to vie :D She is definitely one talented and lovely poet and so are you for writing this beauty for her :D Thank you so much for entering this in my contest and super congrats to you! :D
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Date: 6/1/2012 2:48:00 AM
This is utterly amazing- keep it up!
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Date: 5/31/2012 8:06:00 AM
thanks alot for my placement in your contest.
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Date: 5/31/2012 8:05:00 AM
I'm catching up as usual, Elliott, i really like this, a brilliant poem in its own right, also a wonderful tribute to a wonderful lady. harry
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Date: 5/30/2012 11:26:00 PM
Thank you all!!!
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Date: 5/29/2012 9:35:00 AM
Elliott a great poem to a great poet and lady..David
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Date: 5/28/2012 12:15:00 PM
This is a master piece Mr Bowe! truely beautiful!
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Date: 5/28/2012 10:47:00 AM
lovely dedication to a wonderful lovely gal!
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Date: 5/28/2012 5:01:00 AM
I am sure that Vie will enjoy this one..Very interesting closing..Sara..Thanks for stopping by..
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Date: 5/28/2012 12:06:00 AM
Such beautiful words for a wonderful lady and great poetess... Lovely Eliott...Charma
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Date: 5/27/2012 3:29:00 PM
Wow, I wish I were her. Excellent Elliot. You sure know how to write poetry. Sometimes mine sounds like fluff.
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Date: 5/27/2012 2:26:00 PM
I AM ALREADY A FAN! Thank you.
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Date: 5/27/2012 1:09:00 PM
This is such a tribute, Elliott! And the ending is as sweet as spice! YOu got her down pat! She is a great poetess indeed!....Gwendolen
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Date: 5/27/2012 9:25:00 AM
Nicely praised with poetic heart, loved and thank you for reading my write, always bl
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Date: 5/27/2012 8:37:00 AM
Elliott, This is so full of poetic turns. The second verse in particular is a dream. Sober or drunk. I responded to your lovely comment on my page. I'm not sure if anyone checks those or not. how did I miss you? love, Kathy
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Date: 5/27/2012 5:40:00 AM
this is a lovely and romantic.. well written..Joseph
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Date: 5/26/2012 10:49:00 PM
Very cool, original poem, Elliot! Jimbo
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Date: 5/26/2012 9:46:00 PM
A beautiful poem for a beautiful lady. I too think she is divine!! She is a poetess in every sense of the word, and you are a wonderful poet!
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Date: 5/26/2012 9:21:00 PM
well written
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Date: 5/26/2012 7:53:00 PM
enough said
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