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Memories are like flowers When the bright petals fall The heart is webbed by powers Of seeds growing at the wall And so the times your lashes Dance, with every smile and glance The heart giggles and splashes Drunken from sips of chance To breathe your beauty And believe your flirting While in the pew of sanity I hide the subtle hurting What was that desire, that love bright That still come haunting me last night?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/16/2009 12:25:00 AM
Excellen one for my favourites L'nass.It's great to read your work once again.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/15/2009 6:37:00 PM
Love can be painful and precious with one word either way... these words of yours say so very much... u have incorporated such emotion into a few lines... new fav for me... thankxxx for sharing and reading lots of my poetry tonight... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie...
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Date: 12/15/2009 6:14:00 PM
"i hide the subtle hurting" this is something we have all tried to do at ;one point or another nice wrte here, L'nass
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Date: 12/15/2009 11:17:00 AM
Oh, L'nass, your gift is superb! I love this. You express your thoughts so eloquently! Thanks for sharing your work with us. Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 12/15/2009 8:36:00 AM
Your poetry is hard to match .... outstanding and beautiful, L'nass! ~ Carrie
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Date: 12/15/2009 7:30:00 AM
Memories have a way of showing up at unexpected times and places. Keep the creative and magical pen flowing. Sara
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