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To Thrive In Pristine Dawns

Though set apart, their fate is dealt
Upon a solid mount of wealth
Beauty mirrored by crystal lake
With compass set, young roots do take
Encamped by water, air and sun
Forever to thrive in pristine dawns
~*~

Copyright © Audrey Haick | Year Posted 2011

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Rhys Matthew Date: 12/28/2011 7:07:00 PM Exquisite. I love a poem that asks to be (and must needs be) read again, and again. Richest imagery. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 9/27/2011 10:13:00 AM I am stopping by your wonderful poetry today to thank you for your kind comments on my writing Annalise. Hope you have an inspiration filled week. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 9/26/2011 2:17:00 PM Just visiting this one again Annalise...good job:) Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 9/25/2011 11:18:00 AM Such beauty Annalise, really enjoyed this write of yours, especially with the summer's day we are having today, love wilma Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/22/2011 1:07:00 AM Oh, I really like how you did yours. Pristine is surely a word that comes to mind when seeing that picture! Luv,Andrea PS. I am seeing congratulations below here. So congratulations!!! Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 9/21/2011 2:26:00 PM Congratulations on your win in the contest of Moses "A Nature Verse" Annalise. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 9/19/2011 5:20:00 PM Beautiful imagery, Annalise. Many congrats : ) Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/19/2011 12:33:00 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, Annalise Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 9/19/2011 1:11:00 AM so finely written, anna...cheers and more cheers to you for the great win..:) huggs! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/19/2011 1:03:00 AM Hey, I see you won with this one too. Congratulations, Annalise. Login to Reply

Ralph Taylor Date: 9/18/2011 11:08:00 PM Congrats on your win, Annalise. Nice going. Thanks for your comments. xxxRalph Login to Reply

Don Johnson Date: 9/18/2011 7:38:00 PM Pristine Dawn the sun comes up, all as sweet as a cattle pup, pretty picture butter cup , to sweeten the horizon...well done ... Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 9/18/2011 4:35:00 PM Annalise, thanks for taking the time to offer your memorable verse, the honor was mine in reading this worthy Verse entry. Agape, Moses. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/18/2011 2:34:00 PM CONGRATS ANNALISE ON ANOTHER GRAND WIN WITH LOVELY LINES OF POETIC ART MY FRIEND..LUV.. HAPPY SUNDAY .. Login to Reply

Bob Quigley Date: 9/18/2011 12:38:00 PM Congratulations on your 7th place finish in Johns contest. Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 9/17/2011 10:55:00 PM This is lovely, Annalise, best of luck in the contest and thanks so much for your kind comments on my poetry~~ Login to Reply

Joy Wellington Date: 9/17/2011 7:17:00 PM Ever the very discriptive poet. Pleasure to read. Love always. Jew@Smalling Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 9/17/2011 5:54:00 PM we take so much for granted in nature,awesome poem, such sophistication. harry Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 9/17/2011 5:25:00 PM Enjoyed reading your creative and descriptive work..Reads like a winner to me.Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 9/17/2011 3:58:00 PM Enjoyed the rich tones, and theme you have explored here Annalise.. Login to Reply

Jl Sadberry Date: 9/17/2011 3:36:00 PM Smile, *^_^* “This Beautifully Brushed Painting Makes My Consider A Few Verses Spoken By God Unto Humanity & Perhaps Beyound My Dear Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful Annalise! *^_^* Yet, Nothing Your Lovely Self My Dear I Find No Need to Reiterate These Words Unto Your Beauty *^_^* For I Am, Quite Certain That Your Treasures Quite of Aware of They Already *^_^* And I Can Somehow View Paradise Amid This Lakeside or Seasides View *^_^* Pristine & Thank You, for Your Lovely Visit, My Dear!” === My Love Unto Your Beauty, Always & Forever, Jasper * Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/17/2011 1:27:00 AM NIce to see you here tonight, Annalise. I love the title of this poem and how you wrote about the pristine nature. Mine was very similar in theme! Login to Reply

James Peranteau Date: 9/16/2011 11:30:00 PM Annalise, dear poet; this write has placed me 'pon, life's quick journey.....a soul mate...hehehe...lol... it's cool...great write my friend ! Have a wonderful weekend...much love, james Login to Reply

Tobey Hill Date: 9/16/2011 12:25:00 PM nice write...TAH Login to Reply