To Thrive In Pristine Dawns

Though set apart, their fate is dealt
Upon a solid mount of wealth
Beauty mirrored by crystal lake
With compass set, young roots do take
Encamped by water, air and sun
Forever to thrive in pristine dawns
~*~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Matthew Avatar
December 28, 2011 at 7:07 PM
Exquisite. I love a poem that asks to be (and must needs be) read again, and again. Richest imagery.
Brown Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 10:13 AM
I am stopping by your wonderful poetry today to thank you for your kind comments on my writing Annalise. Hope you have an inspiration filled week. Love, Carol
Maverick Avatar
September 26, 2011 at 2:17 PM
Just visiting this one again Annalise...good job:)
Neels Avatar
September 25, 2011 at 11:18 AM
Such beauty Annalise, really enjoyed this write of yours, especially with the summer's day we are having today, love wilma
Dietrich Avatar
September 22, 2011 at 1:07 AM
Oh, I really like how you did yours. Pristine is surely a word that comes to mind when seeing that picture! Luv,Andrea PS. I am seeing congratulations below here. So congratulations!!!
Brown Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 2:26 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest of Moses "A Nature Verse" Annalise. Love, Carol
Horne Avatar
September 19, 2011 at 5:20 PM
Beautiful imagery, Annalise. Many congrats : )
Mehta Avatar
September 19, 2011 at 12:33 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, Annalise
Onclaud Avatar
September 19, 2011 at 1:11 AM
so finely written, anna...cheers and more cheers to you for the great win..:) huggs!
Dietrich Avatar
September 19, 2011 at 1:03 AM
Hey, I see you won with this one too. Congratulations, Annalise.
Taylor Avatar
September 18, 2011 at 11:08 PM
Congrats on your win, Annalise. Nice going. Thanks for your comments. xxxRalph
Johnson Avatar
September 18, 2011 at 7:38 PM
Pristine Dawn the sun comes up, all as sweet as a cattle pup, pretty picture butter cup , to sweeten the horizon...well done ...
Freeman Avatar
September 18, 2011 at 4:35 PM
Annalise, thanks for taking the time to offer your memorable verse, the honor was mine in reading this worthy Verse entry. Agape, Moses.
Sweetheart Avatar
September 18, 2011 at 2:34 PM
CONGRATS ANNALISE ON ANOTHER GRAND WIN WITH LOVELY LINES OF POETIC ART MY FRIEND..LUV.. HAPPY SUNDAY ..
Quigley Avatar
September 18, 2011 at 12:38 PM
Congratulations on your 7th place finish in Johns contest.
La France Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 10:55 PM
This is lovely, Annalise, best of luck in the contest and thanks so much for your kind comments on my poetry~~
Wellington Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 7:17 PM
Ever the very discriptive poet. Pleasure to read. Love always. Jew@Smalling
Horsman Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 5:54 PM
we take so much for granted in nature,awesome poem, such sophistication. harry
Kendrick Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 5:25 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative and descriptive work..Reads like a winner to me.Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara
Maverick Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 3:58 PM
Enjoyed the rich tones, and theme you have explored here Annalise..
Sadberry Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 3:36 PM
Smile, *^_^* “This Beautifully Brushed Painting Makes My Consider A Few Verses Spoken By God Unto Humanity & Perhaps Beyound My Dear Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful Annalise! *^_^* Yet, Nothing Your Lovely Self My Dear I Find No Need to Reiterate These Words Unto Your Beauty *^_^* For I Am, Quite Certain That Your Treasures Quite of Aware of They Already *^_^* And I Can Somehow View Paradise Amid This Lakeside or Seasides View *^_^* Pristine & Thank You, for Your Lovely Visit, My Dear!” === My Love Unto Your Beauty, Always & Forever, Jasper *
Dietrich Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 1:27 AM
NIce to see you here tonight, Annalise. I love the title of this poem and how you wrote about the pristine nature. Mine was very similar in theme!
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September 16, 2011 at 11:30 PM
Annalise, dear poet; this write has placed me 'pon, life's quick journey.....a soul mate...hehehe...lol... it's cool...great write my friend ! Have a wonderful weekend...much love, james
Hill Avatar
September 16, 2011 at 12:25 PM
nice write...TAH
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