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To Those Who Fail

To those who win the prize is given They laugh and dance in glee And little thought is ever given To those who claim defeat. Yet if not for those who walk In shame and oft despair Away from dreams unfulfilled They would not be there. For every one who wins the prize Unsung are those who fail But they’re the ones who often push The victor to the grail So hats off to those who tried But suffer their defeat The day will come when you alone Will gain the victor’s seat.

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Date: 3/8/2024 3:56:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 9/16/2018 12:55:00 AM
True words.
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Date: 9/15/2018 2:20:00 PM
I like this poem. It expresses me in particular. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 9/10/2018 4:31:00 PM
I love it. Quite an inspirational read.
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Date: 9/8/2018 2:31:00 AM
This piece screams of distress. I can only hope that if it sheds truth on a real life scenario that you have found the courage and strength to carry on. It seems impossible at times but life can be our best revenge. All the best.
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Date: 9/8/2018 2:19:00 AM
This took me back to the exciting bible stories of my Sunday School youth! Thanks for the memories.
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Date: 9/8/2018 2:09:00 AM
Ahh! Nice, encouraging words for those waiting their turn in the winner's circle.
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