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To the Young

On social media and TV, in papers that we buy, bodies well honed and muscles toned, the gorgeous greet our eyes. Through pouting lips in selfies, tousled hair and perfect tans, parading in some foreign place for legions of their fans. To all innocent youngsters for that perfect look they seek, each Venus and Adonis in their eyes, have reached their peak. But pursuing the unobtainable is a voyage crewed by fools, in the waters of self worship run aground in shallow pools. For with each new morning sunrise we turn another page, and time flows like a river and on it floats our age. We treat this Earth like Gods but immortal we are not, friends, family, possessions transient, your life is all you've got. Oh,Youth be kind, be selfless and thus you'll live life well, for precious looks will fade with time and old age will be Hell.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 9/13/2021 11:21:00 AM
Oh so well said, Viv. The short lines are effective and the rhymes flow beautifully.
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Date: 8/29/2021 12:26:00 PM
A timely piece, As now is not a time for the young, To go out looking for admirers, If they want peace of mind in old age, Or the chance to live to a decent age. Selfishness seems to be the order the day. Yet poetry like this gives one hope. Take care Viv, David in NZ
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Date: 8/15/2021 11:39:00 AM
Yet human nature is to search for a familiar face in a crowd . . . .Nice write! Enjoyed!
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