To the Soup

Finally a place
Amongst the chaos 
Of cyperspace
Where my meager
Scribblings are read
By kind eyes and
Appreciative hearts
No more trepidation
When I click on 
That ominous button
COMMENTS
Because someone has cut
My idea to pieces
Perhaps because I 
Am no good – or – 
Perhaps because I 
Am better than they
Now I can eagerly
Await the positive message
Or well worded 
Criticism and I feel
I am a better artist
Because of this place.
Thank-you, Soup
For giving me a home
For my thoughts, and ideas
And my creative spirit.

Written April 7, 2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 16, 2010 at 12:41 PM
I liked this..my sentiments also:)
Muzzey Avatar
April 7, 2010 at 1:26 PM
Welcome to the ps site. The encouragement here is overwhelming. Great write, thank you for sharing. Caryl
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April 7, 2010 at 1:16 PM
great tribute to the soup, you have a gem of a poem here. Great poet friends also.
Drover Avatar
April 7, 2010 at 11:31 AM
Thanks Faleshia. Right back at you!
Murphy Avatar
April 7, 2010 at 11:27 AM
you are a great poet and don't let anyone tell you different believe in yourself and keep on writting my dear friend faleshia
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