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You were only twelve when I first met you through your mom a special star in the sky that shone always brighter then the sun You had the rare ability Alison of seeing auras around each soul and when you spoke about it, your eyes pinned me like dark coal Then you visited Quebec City and you came down with a disease a rare one, with only 7 in the world, no drugs could fast appease Intestinal lymphangiectasia, as rare as it was , you fought it still at the Sick Kids Hospital, they placed a tube and fed you at will You raised money for others like you, and doctors were baffled by the sheer stamina of you, we had a banquet and tickets raffled You wore a lavender gown and you gave a speech that made us cry at the age of eighteen you died, and never questioned God's why Your mom, my best friend, got a coach with horses of white rhodium and at your funeral the congregation of angels were your symposium I never cried so much as I did that day, when you left behind Caroline a sister who loved you more then anyone else, but it was your time Alison my dear may you rest in peace, and may the wayward dove bring your memory to the caves of Al, where children children bravely sing God speed my love, may you arrive to the summit of your realization that the auras you saw were a reflection of your Angel immunization . August 22, 2021 Sponsor Regina McIntosh Contest Name The One Who Touched My Heart

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Date: 8/28/2021 1:36:00 AM
Such a sad but great tribute to that sweet angel, Alison:)
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Date: 8/23/2021 4:08:00 PM
Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, A very sad poem. a loss of a friend. I can tell you were very close. Hugs.
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Date: 8/24/2021 10:35:00 AM
Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, they are in a better place. Hugs my friend.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/23/2021 6:32:00 PM
Yes indeed, I loved the whole family, precious people.
Date: 8/23/2021 11:51:00 AM
Some people do have "the sight" and are able to see beyond misery .... nice write!
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Date: 8/23/2021 6:31:00 PM
Thank you Rico, she did indeed perceive much more then most at a young age.
Date: 8/23/2021 9:40:00 AM
A lovely tribute to a brave soul.RIP...Delice
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/23/2021 6:31:00 PM
Thank you Delice, its been years, still I recall her smile
Date: 8/23/2021 6:01:00 AM
A heartfelt, touching piece, Vienna. You shine in your poems, as always my friend.
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Date: 8/23/2021 6:31:00 PM
I much appreciate your words today Vijay thank you
Date: 8/23/2021 2:19:00 AM
Great tribute to a lost soul. When illnesses are few, almost no one bothers to fin a cure. Lovely poem. Hugs.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/23/2021 6:30:00 PM
Yes indeed they did try their best Victor, it was hard for the family to accept.
Date: 8/22/2021 11:12:00 PM
Tremendous tribute, Mystic Rose! Rare gift, ability to read the human aura
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/23/2021 6:30:00 PM
Yes indeed Seeker, not many can do that, and at such a young age, she had many questions to be answered ,
Date: 8/22/2021 7:44:00 PM
Wonderful experience and a great tribute. Great Write as usual. God Bless!
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/23/2021 6:29:00 PM
Thank you dear Chris, some people are like stars they never lose their spark
Date: 8/22/2021 7:18:00 PM
It's sad and heartbreaking, but it's also a lovely memorial to a lovely soul. It's no surprise Alison touched the heart. Rose. Blessings and kindest thoughts
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/23/2021 6:29:00 PM
She was my best friends daughter, and I loved her very much.
Date: 8/22/2021 5:31:00 PM
Sad, tragic but a beautiful tribute to a beautiful soul. It’s no wonder Alison touched your heart Rose, she was indeed an angel on earth… Belle
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Date: 8/23/2021 6:28:00 PM
Belle, I never forgot that angel, she was wise beyond her years,