To the One That Never Accepts Help...

She sings a stinging melodramatic tale 
Emphasizing agony and youthful betrayal.
Impulsively distraught between facts of existence
Unhealthily growing with mindful persistence.
Scaring the concerned and ignoring their cheers
Cutting the ties of her formative years.
Second guessing herself and ending confused
Her faithful conscience thinning, and bruised.
Questions arise with no meaningful answers
Wise methods disappear with kindled romances.
Fatuous smile and ever-changing eyes
This could destroy her intoxicating guise.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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March 28, 2016 at 11:04 PM
Samantha Bialachowski, you've expressed yourself well, I like the last line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Love ~LINDA~
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August 11, 2015 at 10:53 AM
Samantha,, enjoyed reading today.... SKAT
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December 30, 2010 at 11:14 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Samantha. I will be back after the New Year to read more of your poetry. Wishing you a very Happy New Year. Love, Carol
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