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To the One That Never Accepts Help...

She sings a stinging melodramatic tale Emphasizing agony and youthful betrayal. Impulsively distraught between facts of existence Unhealthily growing with mindful persistence. Scaring the concerned and ignoring their cheers Cutting the ties of her formative years. Second guessing herself and ending confused Her faithful conscience thinning, and bruised. Questions arise with no meaningful answers Wise methods disappear with kindled romances. Fatuous smile and ever-changing eyes This could destroy her intoxicating guise.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 3/28/2016 11:04:00 PM
Samantha Bialachowski, you've expressed yourself well, I like the last line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Love ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/11/2015 10:53:00 AM
Samantha,, enjoyed reading today.... SKAT
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Date: 12/30/2010 11:14:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Samantha. I will be back after the New Year to read more of your poetry. Wishing you a very Happy New Year. Love, Carol
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