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To the Grave

Douse me in sugar coated lies Bind me with possessive ties caress me with that bitter torment I know your heart is sitting dormant Kiss me with those poisonous lips Embrace me with your lethal grip Compel my mind to now concave As you Love me deeply to the grave

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Tara Dawn

Date: 12/27/2019 7:25:00 PM

That was powerful. Brilliant!!

Elaine Perrin
Date: 4/28/2020 3:27:00 AM

Thank you Tara :-) x

Ann Foster

Date: 11/7/2019 12:29:00 PM

Wow...and ouch... dark and I liked it. Sad, and poignant. On target to the heart. Ann

Elaine Perrin
Date: 11/13/2019 6:00:00 AM

Thank you Ann :-) x

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/29/2019 3:49:00 PM

Powerfully short poem, El. But it packs so much emotional truth. An instant fave for sure. Golden ink glow poetry! Love and peace always.

Elaine Perrin
Date: 11/13/2019 6:00:00 AM

Thanks again Freddie :-) x

James Inman

Date: 10/27/2019 10:06:00 AM

Beautifully written but rather disturbing write, Elaine. Although passionate in its intent, his type of relationship might well lead to an early grave. Minimally to pain and heartbreak.

Elaine Perrin
Date: 11/13/2019 5:59:00 AM

Exactly and thank god I escaped it in time. Thank you for the visit and lovely comment x

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/29/2019 3:46:00 AM

Remind me to stay on your good side:) Excellent poetry!

Elaine Perrin
Date: 9/29/2019 4:11:00 AM

Lol Thank you Joe :-) x

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/29/2019 12:02:00 AM

A wonderful write and I enjoyed reading. Intense love... Bless you always

Elaine Perrin
Date: 9/29/2019 3:17:00 AM

Happy you enjoyed it , thanks Regina :-) x