To Tatiana

Your eyes are at the “Ocean” –
at the crossroad of the winds –
have a depth and no deception,
taken the cover off ignorance.

Your eyes me fortunately ruffle,
and I’m as not a swimmer versed
afraid to dive but try to gamble 
as being a thorough man in haste.

Your eyes to me are real puzzle: 
they give me such a virgin smile
preventing me from any bustle –
within them passion is alight.

Your eyes in gaiety desire:  
by stealth they make me understand –
when He and She are getting higher –
He must be first to start a game. 

Your eyes are really unbounded
and so a new line to be born
you are embraced by me astounded
and on my shoulder is your arm.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 9/9/2009 7:40:00 PM
line one is unbelievably artistic! Oleg!...jim
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Date: 9/9/2009 3:33:00 PM
to k k iloduba jnr: Whatever you write you write about yourself. Sometimes, the ability to read between lines in a poem helps to learn about the man more than any CV
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Date: 9/9/2009 3:07:00 PM
look into them again and again..........they should carry ur reflection.
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