To Silent Symphonies

Down the drainpipe the water clanged,
flowing in loud torrents,
pit-ter-pat-ter the metal sang
a sad and sorrowful lament. 

The sky had burst with tears of woe
and sparrow fled to nest.
The butterflies where did they go
when all of us sought rest?

So long, the earth was drowned in rain
that ducks swam on the lawn.
No dry beds, no solace from pain
just the pat-ter, forlorn.

Tears ran silent in sympathy 
for the losses yet unknown.
Ah, for bright sunshine’s harmony
and kindnesses once shown.

Pit-ter-pat-ter the drainpipe plead,
on and on it muttered, 
certainly, it was time it said
for kinder bread and butter?

Date: 9/26/11
Poet: D. Guzzi
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 8:27 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Flowing Water" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 5:05 PM
Congrats Debbie on a terrific win with lovely words of poetic art luv..
Ramage Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 1:39 AM
Great win Debbie. Please don't be offended but I was wondering if this was written about the hurricane? I don't mean to sound thick but I am always interested in the poem's meaning. Lee
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October 1, 2011 at 8:47 AM
No this was written for the contest during a rainstorm and during the time last week when it seemed everyone on Soup was calling me names and I was crying which IS the Silent Symphony [tears] tears are the second layer of flowing water here.
Quigley Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 12:53 AM
Congratulations Debbie on your win in the Flowing Water contest.
Merryman Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 11:39 PM
Congrats on your 4th place win, Debbie! Kim
Johnson Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 11:22 PM
A great take on the contest Debbie and a great win. congratulations. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 10:59 PM
Congrats Debbie on a great big win with flowing waters contest luv.. great lines ...
Roberts Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 10:49 PM
congrats Debbie on your 4th place win in the contest
Roberts Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 9:44 PM
still not showing in the contest Debbie
Maverick Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 4:33 PM
enjoyed the melody in this liquid picture you have shown us Debbie, thank you for comments, i am not aware of being in a contest..i was thinking of entering one, but am not aware of any placments..
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