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To Shine

Across the road, wind blows snow in circles A predictable winter view Traveled by many in time But some things seen by few The stream speaks in comforting gurgles behind the old stone wall Lined with brittle edges of ice No warning signs not to fall Slippery, but covered with frozen crystals A place where blind choices can be made In the light and the darkness, It's a crossroad leading through sun and shade Every cautious step gains more importance as white and black all intertwine There's the warmth and there's the cold When enduring it all, he or she starts to shine Heidi Sands 1/3/25 (C)opyright

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Date: 1/12/2025 3:45:00 AM
Severe Winter conditions bring with it severe dangers and caution warned - a creative write my friend, for 'There's the warmth and there's the cold, When enduring it all, he or she starts to shine'. Blessings and hugs my friend, and a wonderful 2025 I wish for you. Jennifer.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/12/2025 4:58:00 AM
Yes. Thank you Jennifer. I wish you the best for 2025. Hugs :)
Date: 1/9/2025 8:39:00 PM
Heidi, Wonderful to read this. A pristine way to express what can be felt and touched by a special few. -Richard
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/10/2025 2:38:00 AM
Hi Richard . It is nice to see you and I appreciate your kind comment. It made my day. I hope all is well. Happy New Year :)
Date: 1/6/2025 10:47:00 AM
Your "To Shine" tells a winter story. Pretty to look at but can be very dangerous. Hope you will stay safe/warm this winter. Write On with Hugs/Blessings............
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/6/2025 12:37:00 PM
Thank you Paula. I appreciate your kind comments . Hugs and Blessings :)
Date: 1/3/2025 3:13:00 PM
To Shine . Written 1/3/25
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