To Shine


Across the road, wind blows snow in circles
A predictable winter view
Traveled by many in time
But some things seen by few

The stream speaks in comforting gurgles
behind the old stone wall
Lined with brittle edges of ice
No warning signs not to fall

Slippery, but covered with frozen crystals
A place where blind choices can be made
In the light and the darkness,
It's a crossroad leading through sun and shade

Every cautious step gains more importance
as white and black all intertwine
There's the warmth and there's the  cold
When enduring it all, he or she starts to shine

Heidi Sands

1/3/25

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/12/2025 3:45:00 AM

Severe Winter conditions bring with it severe dangers and caution warned - a creative write my friend, for 'There's the warmth and there's the cold, When enduring it all, he or she starts to shine'. Blessings and hugs my friend, and a wonderful 2025 I wish for you. Jennifer.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/12/2025 4:58:00 AM

Yes. Thank you Jennifer. I wish you the best for 2025. Hugs :)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 1/9/2025 8:39:00 PM

Heidi, Wonderful to read this. A pristine way to express what can be felt and touched by a special few. -Richard

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/10/2025 2:38:00 AM

Hi Richard . It is nice to see you and I appreciate your kind comment. It made my day. I hope all is well. Happy New Year :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/6/2025 10:47:00 AM

Your "To Shine" tells a winter story. Pretty to look at but can be very dangerous. Hope you will stay safe/warm this winter. Write On with Hugs/Blessings............

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/6/2025 12:37:00 PM

Thank you Paula. I appreciate your kind comments . Hugs and Blessings :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/3/2025 3:13:00 PM

To Shine . Written 1/3/25