John Loving Iii Poet Dramatic Verse

To She Who Must Be Obeyed

A very special love I craved
It just appeared I had not prayed
The upper class the highest grade
Back and forth with words we played
Sincere was my heart with commitment made
My thoughts and desires are daily paid
Hopes to please with eloquent praise
To the one who's feet my love I laid

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The Situation October 20, 2013 at 4:08 PM Sweet memories

Phyllis Babcock October 19, 2013 at 6:33 PM Very nice rhyme on this poem John. I am very behind on my reading and comments. Thanks for the fav on my poem. love phyl

Debbie Duncan February 5, 2013 at 1:55 PM Awesome write you have here John,,, thank you 4 reading Tudor Court", I don't have freckles,, that means I'm not a redhead LOL ;} have a great day ;}

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 16, 2013 at 7:53 AM this is nice John , very romantic xx

Debbie Guzzi January 14, 2013 at 3:43 PM So nice to read your work this evening john I hope all's well. Light & love

Debbie Guzzi January 11, 2013 at 4:49 PM Everyone mind is turning to love..me I now have a chest cold grrr..:0 Light & Love

Joann Grisetti January 10, 2013 at 1:07 PM A very moving romantic poem. thank you for comments on my poems. If you have a great number of poems, publish a book.

Charlotte Puddifoot January 8, 2013 at 4:01 PM the most special love appears when we least expect it... John Loving Iii January 10, 2013 at 1:43 PM Boo

Audrey Haick January 7, 2013 at 8:48 PM This is beautiful, JL! My very best wish for this New Year! Thanks for the visit and yes, I fall into that category of procrastinators...sometimes. Annalise John Loving Iii January 8, 2013 at 10:55 AM Thas why I don't have a book.

Sara Kendrick January 7, 2013 at 3:59 PM Very romantic work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by my work about thinking that everyone can be born again if given the opportunity..Sara