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To She Who Must Be Obeyed

A very special love I craved It just appeared I had not prayed The upper class the highest grade Back and forth with words we played Sincere was my heart with commitment made My thoughts and desires are daily paid Hopes to please with eloquent praise To the one who's feet my love I laid

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The Situation

Date: 10/20/2013 4:08:00 PM

Sweet memories

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/19/2013 6:33:00 PM

Very nice rhyme on this poem John. I am very behind on my reading and comments. Thanks for the fav on my poem. love phyl

Debbie Duncan

Date: 2/5/2013 1:55:00 PM

Awesome write you have here John,,, thank you 4 reading Tudor Court", I don't have freckles,, that means I'm not a redhead LOL ;} have a great day ;}

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/16/2013 7:53:00 AM

this is nice John , very romantic xx

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/14/2013 3:43:00 PM

So nice to read your work this evening john I hope all's well. Light & love

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/11/2013 4:49:00 PM

Everyone mind is turning to love..me I now have a chest cold grrr..:0 Light & Love

Joann Grisetti

Date: 1/10/2013 1:07:00 PM

A very moving romantic poem. thank you for comments on my poems. If you have a great number of poems, publish a book.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 1/8/2013 4:01:00 PM

the most special love appears when we least expect it...

John Loving Iii
Date: 1/10/2013 1:43:00 PM

Boo

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/7/2013 8:48:00 PM

This is beautiful, JL! My very best wish for this New Year! Thanks for the visit and yes, I fall into that category of procrastinators...sometimes. Annalise

John Loving Iii
Date: 1/8/2013 10:55:00 AM

Thas why I don't have a book.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/7/2013 3:59:00 PM

Very romantic work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by my work about thinking that everyone can be born again if given the opportunity..Sara