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To See Starlight Flow

I opened every window to see starlight flow-- and it danced through every room casting shadows on the door. Moon dust glistened in a tornadic swirl... in their pink tutu our girls would twirl. This moment in time, it just feels so right. Let's keep the windows open until tomorrow night!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/2/2016 6:19:00 PM
WINDOWS INTO A CONTENTED SOUL SHOULD REMAIN OPENED. Superb poetry my friend. Solid 7..
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Date: 3/26/2016 7:16:00 PM
Great moments live on. One of your best Mark.
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Date: 3/27/2016 11:41:00 PM
Thanks Tim!!!
Date: 3/26/2016 3:30:00 PM
Lovely Red !
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Date: 3/27/2016 11:42:00 PM
Thanks Charmaine!
Date: 3/26/2016 3:22:00 PM
Loved it, Red! Great vitality - Nicely penned! My very best regards. :) john
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Date: 3/27/2016 11:41:00 PM
Thanks John!
Date: 3/26/2016 2:54:00 PM
- Lovely written, Red - (All windows closed, powerful winds and heavy rain :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/27/2016 11:42:00 PM
Thanks Anne!

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