To See Starlight Flow

I opened every window
to see starlight flow--

and it danced through every room
casting shadows on the door.

Moon dust glistened
in a tornadic swirl...
in their pink tutu our 
girls would twirl.

This moment in time,
it just feels so right.	
Let's keep the windows open
until tomorrow night!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lindley Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 6:19 PM
WINDOWS INTO A CONTENTED SOUL SHOULD REMAIN OPENED. Superb poetry my friend. Solid 7..
Smith Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 7:16 PM
Great moments live on. One of your best Mark.
Barchettadrive Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 11:41 PM
Thanks Tim!!!
Chircop Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 3:30 PM
Lovely Red !
Barchettadrive Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 11:42 PM
Thanks Charmaine!
Fleming Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 3:22 PM
Loved it, Red! Great vitality - Nicely penned! My very best regards. :) john
Barchettadrive Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 11:41 PM
Thanks John!
Andresen Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 2:54 PM
- Lovely written, Red - (All windows closed, powerful winds and heavy rain :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Barchettadrive Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 11:42 PM
Thanks Anne!
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