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To See a New Day

If tears were rain A river would find me Drowning Drifting away Though love is pain Can’t leave it behind me Yearning Wanting to stay Where will it end Can rainbows be certain Waiting Learning to pray Sun, be my friend Tear open the curtain Hoping To see a new day

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/10/2019 5:24:00 PM

Hello Mike, a beautiful poem. I like the last verse the best. xxxxxxx-ooooooo. Have a nice evening my friend.

Mike Gentile
Date: 7/24/2019 5:39:00 PM

Thanks Darlene, I am so happy that you liked it!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/11/2019 12:11:00 PM

Beautiful, bittersweet poem, Mike-- a blend of sadness and hope. Janice

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/11/2019 9:06:00 AM

- Hope all is well with you, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/10/2019 9:26:00 PM

Revisiting this hauntingly lovely write, Mike. (soupmail) ~ Gershon

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/11/2019 8:29:00 AM

Thanks so much Gershon!!

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 3/8/2019 1:53:00 PM

An appealing poem, written and expressed in awesome poetic soulful tunes and wordings and that's why it is admirable wow. Kudos. So nice to read from u again, Pleez do comment my newest poem too.

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/8/2019 6:43:00 PM

Thanks so much and I will certainly do that!!!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/23/2019 10:52:00 PM

Nicely done // with the rain and the sun. Elegance within the economy of lines. ~ Gershon

Mike Gentile
Date: 2/24/2019 8:12:00 AM

Thanks Gershon, hope you are enjoying your Sunday!!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/22/2019 7:26:00 PM

Your poem is beautifully poignant Mike. Love is worth waiting for. xxoo

Mike Gentile
Date: 2/23/2019 9:50:00 AM

Thanks so much Connie xxoo

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/20/2019 5:39:00 AM

We all long for that sunshine to breakthrough in our lives sometimes, but at times we feel like it never will, but it does. Hope all's well Mike. Tom.

Mike Gentile
Date: 2/20/2019 6:15:00 AM

Thanks Tom xxoo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/20/2019 5:15:00 AM

- If I were the sun ... I'd dry your tears - A lovely poem, Mike :) - Touching - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 2/20/2019 5:32:00 AM

That’s so sweet, thanks Anne-Lise xxoo