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I love the way the fog rests on the mountains, like a soft blanket With the rocky cliffs showing through like faces in the hills Even with relentless rain, there is peace to be found Looking in the distance, at drapes of floating mist Knowing when they lift, everything will shine once again As if some beauty of the landscape, needed cover to renew Heidi Sands 7/26/18

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Date: 7/27/2018 12:29:00 PM
Heidi.. you paint a place I'd like to be both inside and out!!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/27/2018 12:36:00 PM
Thank you Lyric Man :)
Date: 7/26/2018 5:24:00 PM
Nice imagery of a mountain scene Heidi..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/26/2018 6:04:00 PM
Thank you Joseph :)
Date: 7/26/2018 3:33:00 PM
Your nature poetry shines with scenic pleasure..lovely description, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/26/2018 3:40:00 PM
Thank you Vijay. Your feedback is always appreciated. :)
Date: 7/26/2018 1:38:00 PM
What a beautiful image you have created, like a photo in word form. The soft blanket of mist I've seen many times . Great write Heidi. Tom
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/26/2018 1:48:00 PM
Thank you Tom! It is nice to see :)

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