Justin Bordner Poet Romanticism

To Pray On Your Flesh

I want to place my final prayer
upon your plush velvet neck
murmuring my needs warmly
on that expressway where the crossroads of love and lust unite
focusing the steam of my soul there
confessing wholeheartedly
that my heart cannot move without you,
with my thick, steady hand rotating around your priceless grail
feeling the communion of our desire come to life
as your mouth becomes the chalice that holds my heartbeat
in this moment that confirms our sanctity -

J.A.B.

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Freddie Robinson Jr. October 21, 2017 at 5:03 AM Gorgeously romantic poem, Justin. The layered emotional depth is intricately woven by a creative tapestry of words. Great poem. May love light your path always. Justin Bordner October 22, 2017 at 6:37 PM Two hearts united in purpose ignites a divine fire upon the flesh...creativity becomes spiritual...to love survival is to love life, the survival of your sanctity. Thank you for the kind comment Poet...J.A.B.

Verlena S. Walker October 19, 2015 at 8:12 PM Enjoyed Justin... Verlena Justin Bordner October 20, 2015 at 1:42 AM To enjoy our final prayer is all that we can ask for Verlena, thank you for visiting me again unique Poetess...J.A.B.

Dalia Shahein October 19, 2015 at 7:04 PM Omg !! This is an incredible poem , it'so damn romantic I really liked it and enjoyed reading it very very beautiful words I don't know if this is a fictional or not but if it's not then the one u love is a very lucky lady and a very special one from the way u described ur desires Justin Bordner October 20, 2015 at 1:39 AM She is my great desire Dalia...J.A.B.

Afolabi Muideen October 3, 2015 at 11:05 AM A well and a great write Justin, I'm intrigued by your write.........A.M. Justin Bordner October 4, 2015 at 1:44 AM As love intrigues us, our passions pursue the pinnacle of paradise Afolabi...J.A.B.

Charmaine Chircop September 30, 2015 at 1:44 AM As your mouth becomes the chalice that holds my heartbeat..This line has captured my thought with its beauty. I want to place mu final prayer upon your plush velvet neck..Another unique line..Exceptional.A fave . justin-Charma. Justin Bordner September 30, 2015 at 2:35 AM Love becomes a pure heat in the intimacy of those lines Charma...she releases the climax of my heart, her love be my soul supper. Knowing that this poem has caressed your sensuous mind really brings joy to me my Lady Hawk...J.A.B.

Afolabi Muideen September 29, 2015 at 5:46 PM What an extreme great write Justin. Your write is wow to read, it flows smoothly within my mind and intoxicated my sense. A fascinating write indeed.........A.M. Afolabi Muideen September 30, 2015 at 3:33 AM Of course I love, your write always intrigued me. Justin Bordner September 30, 2015 at 2:11 AM Her love puts a WOW in my pulse Afolabi. I'm very happy that you like this love rhythm...J.A.B.

Alexis Y. September 27, 2015 at 1:54 PM Justin, I just came back to read this amazing piece again. Its definitely a fav:-)Alexis Justin Bordner September 28, 2015 at 12:05 AM Yes Alexis, warm the vital points of your love with this living prayer of a man's worship for the woman whom is the nexus of his divine bliss and the Lady of his pious kiss...J.A.B.

Kelly Deschler September 26, 2015 at 11:59 PM "The steam of my soul" is a beautiful and quite a powerful line that expresses the depth of one's passion... A lovely poem, Justin... Heavenly! Justin Bordner September 27, 2015 at 1:46 PM A steam that simmers persistently into the skin of her most delicate need...thank you for the sensitive, beautiful comment Kelly...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian September 25, 2015 at 1:33 AM Needed a second read, Justin.....liked the line....my heart cannot move without you....Beautiful! Justin Bordner September 25, 2015 at 2:19 AM My heart did not hesitate when that truth blew upon it so warmly Eileen. Love's domination is sweet...that's my favorite part...J.A.B.

Agona Apell September 24, 2015 at 8:12 AM I never before had this poetic perspective of the neck: "The expressway where the crossroads of love and lust unite". That's powerful imagery ... Justin Bordner September 24, 2015 at 6:31 PM There be no better place to pray for joy...thank you Agona, she ignites original love throughout my Being. J.A.B.

Kelli White September 24, 2015 at 2:35 AM Symbiotic Union of ethereal proportions. Justin Bordner September 24, 2015 at 3:10 AM Yes Kelli, a synergy of passion, truth, intellect, spirit and love that is phenomenal. Thank you for the marvelously metaphysical comment Kelli...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian September 24, 2015 at 2:04 AM Murmuring my needs....when those needs are heard and feed....that is where love lives and breathes. It is not the case for many.....Justin, this is beautiful...I thought at first there was a mistake in the title. Your passion is passionate in its extreme. The one you love is blessed. Congrats on lifetime membership. Justin Bordner September 24, 2015 at 2:54 AM Our hearts have excellent hearing, and our bodies refuse to ignore the feeling of love. There is no mistake, our prayers know well the skin of our desire Eileen...J.A.B.

Alexis Y. September 24, 2015 at 12:55 AM Justin, this is another outstanding piece of art.The way you penned your expressions of love was priceless.One again you have moved me with your amazing pen. I'm going to fav this beautiful write :-) Alexis 7 P.S. your title alone had so much intrigue. Justin Bordner September 24, 2015 at 1:28 AM Being in love with the most special woman in the world has brought Divinity closer to me than anything else I've ever known Alexis. God, life, passion makes so much more sense with her heat around my heart. Thank you for honoring this love Alexis...J.A.B.

Janet Lorenzo September 23, 2015 at 7:00 PM beautiful Justin Bordner September 23, 2015 at 7:09 PM divine :)

Richard Lamoureux September 23, 2015 at 7:06 AM A moving passionate rendition. Justin Bordner September 23, 2015 at 1:29 PM My Lady and I have sacrificed much on the alter of love, and in return have gained the purest love truth Richard. J.A.B.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 23, 2015 at 3:29 AM Sassy,passionate poem like the use of some terms here that adds intrigue, appeal and stir to thoughts feelings and more: communion, expressway, chalice.. the use of symbolism!! Moving piece indeed!!but you always do with your poems~Olive Eloisa =`) Justin Bordner September 23, 2015 at 1:17 PM We are innocent in our belief in love...sassy and unstoppable, yet we pray for strength and guidance. To have a woman of your intense faith and intelligence appreciate this prayer is auspicious Olive...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal September 22, 2015 at 11:14 PM "on that expressway where the crossroads of love and lust unite, focusing the steam of my soul there"...love those lines to this hot and sensuous poem, Justin. Each touch gives drive to the need, and the passionate murmurs of the fervent prayer, are all very purposeful. I love the language you use to support the beautiful title:"confessing...communion...in this moment that confirms our sanctity." Wrapped up perfectly, effectively and pleasurably. This one's a fav for sure! Always, Laura Justin Bordner September 23, 2015 at 1:39 AM She and I are zealots for love...extreme in our translation of passion, true to our bond. I'm so happy that the continuity of erotic faith, from title to final touch turned you on and piqued your intellect Laura...J.A.B.