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To Pamela

Now that you have left me for reason, I am a man of passed-out desires And passed over dreams Of passed-out desires I have unlearnt to find safe line Between teasing and pleasing you. I am yet to learn the difference Between bare-breasts & fashionable breasts. I’m a man of passed-out desires I have crossed to the other side And I can’t ever go back. I'm a man of passed over dreams. I caressed your body all along the day, Planted my affection on your lips Surely it will stay there forever. Hope, will stay there forever. I'm a man of passed out passions. I never treated you a subordinate eve You were only privileged to get pleasure You never got the pain of childbirth from me It was I who ate the forbidden fruit of Eden. Committing adultery in my old age. I'm a man without dreams and desires.
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ OPTION; http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eOX_ACdOmQE (Bette Midler's version of Tom Waits "Martha") Date 2-3-14 Form : Free Verse Dr. Ram Mehta First Place Win

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Date: 3/12/2014 6:28:00 PM
I am not familiar with the song you chose for this contest, but I really enjoyed your poem. A beautiful write, Dr. Ram! Congratulations on your win, as well!
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Date: 3/12/2014 3:56:00 PM
Beautiful...I liked this so much! Congratulations on your win! Well judged, Archaic!
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Date: 3/11/2014 2:57:00 PM
Very deep and personal. // congrats on your win. // paul
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Date: 3/10/2014 3:43:00 PM
Tough subject to write about! Well deserved top placement! Congratulations!
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Date: 3/9/2014 3:17:00 PM
A fabulous write Dr. Ram. Congratulations on your well deserved win - Connie
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Date: 3/9/2014 12:53:00 PM
Such a deep poem. A worthy winner congratulations Dr Mehta. Jan
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Date: 3/9/2014 12:03:00 PM
Congratulations on the win Dr. Ram... Verlena
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Date: 3/9/2014 11:19:00 AM
Congrats Dr. a great work is this.
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Date: 3/9/2014 10:51:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Doc; thanks for entering :)
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 3/10/2014 6:31:00 AM
Thanks Chan, for my placement in your contest
Date: 2/4/2014 6:51:00 PM
Wow Doctor, this deep, a powerful write that I can look onto myself and compare to. What a write, amazing! Good Job Doctor. :)
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Date: 2/3/2014 12:15:00 PM
A hard nut to crack Dr,what is cloudy to reader is transparent to the poet. Great one. Kayod5.
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Date: 2/3/2014 6:20:00 AM
This is deep....thank you for sharing..
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