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To My Sweet Ella Rose With All My Love

There’s something about my love for my daughter, maybe it’s all the lessons I have taught her. Her bubbly smiles and ways only youth can display, her growing independence, she’s too old to play. Yes, there have been many times I have fought her, but she shines like the constellations in array. The angels danced when Ella Rose was born in sweetness, now I shall confess she is my one true completeness. A simplistic love we share with trust without obligation, for I am so grateful for her God-given creation, even though sometimes she wallows in discreteness, I have full confidence she will show me appreciation. As an infant she laughed at everything in sight, those big brown doe eyes made everything all right. Toddler years arrived with sassy days indeed, but of course, me and her daddy met her every need. For she is my saving grace, my eternal light, I was born to give her roots as God planted the seed. Her daddy will watch out for boys during puppy love, as she will fall in deep with a boy she dreamed of. Sincere adoration and complete devoted affection, we share a bond beyond compare, a rare connection she tells me girly secrets and when push comes to shove, she is flawless to me even through imperfection. She’s an aria of a melody with absolute splendor, she can make a three pointer, yet so elegantly tender. Her gifts of drawing and painting are excellent, for she is my magnificence and has been heaven sent. When she cries little girl tears on my knees I surrender, trying everything in my power to heal her discontent. I never knew a love could be so strong without romance, and I am so grateful God gave me a second chance. See I had a baby before her that gained angel wings, now I have a sweet daughter and loveliness she sings. There’s nothing like watching her graciously dance, and oh, knowing she writes of such silly things. I shall exalt Ella every day and nourish her necessities, and show her my love and compassion shall never cease. 38 lines total Non Romantic Love Poetry Contest Emile Pinet April 5, 2018

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Date: 4/14/2018 10:05:00 AM
A beautiful tribute to your daughter, Laura Loo, and a love-ly introduction to your precious daughter through your, her Mom's, eyes. Profound! Congrats on your win! :) ~ Artsie
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Date: 4/13/2018 10:18:00 AM
Lovely write and dedication to a beloved daughter, true feelings on display in this special write, congrats on a nice win!
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Date: 4/13/2018 5:19:00 AM
Beautiful, Laura. Congrats on your well deserved podium finish with this beauty.
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Date: 4/12/2018 2:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win and your daughter. Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 4/11/2018 7:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful tribute to your daughter!
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Date: 4/11/2018 7:12:00 PM
Congratulations on excellent win, Laura, and such a great tribute to your daughter. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/11/2018 3:32:00 PM
A loving tribute to your sweet daughter. Congratulations on your wonderful second placement! : )
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Date: 4/11/2018 3:02:00 PM
what a lovely tribute LuLoo she sure is as pretty as her mum, congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/11/2018 2:33:00 PM
What a beautiful tribute to your lovely daughter, Laura. Congratulations on your well-deserved podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/11/2018 2:09:00 PM
Congratulations Laura, your poem earned second place in my contest, it was a tough contest to judge, very well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 4/6/2018 10:45:00 AM
I know your feelings Laura, having been blessed with three girls of my own. I wish I could express my love for them as vividly as you have for your Ella Rose.
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