To My Staring Admirer

Shivers, your stares send through me
The implication, I have no clues
Could be shivers of longings of thee
Craving for your soft-spots with dues

Like I'm distant, you stare with remote attention
On ablaze, my breast pounds with uneasiness
And with anxious care, I miss the true emotion
Shrinking from your disapproval, I smile with faithfulness

Your stares, whether for passion or enticement
With blushes they leave me restlessly uneasy
Even with purpose of reprove and chastisement
With blushes, they render me awfully dizzy

My pleas to you, my staring admirer, I present
To confess with sincerity, the desire of your remote part
And to stare no more your thoughts; but consent
To the rhythm and craving of your love-sick heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 8:32 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Akunna. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 2:53 PM
Nice penned expressions on love and its yearnings, Akunna
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