To My Sons

If you can trust yourself 
when all men doubt you
If you can bare to hear the truth 
twisted by fate 
to make a trap for fools
If you can see all the things 
u gave your life to, broken 
Yet pick them all up and rebuilt them
If you can walk with kings 
and not lose your common core
And still keep your virtue
When neither Foes and Loving friends 
can either hurt you
If all men count with you
But none too much
If you can feel the Unforgiven trysts
And still walk the path of vigor
In this world and everything in it
You'll be a man
My son.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mac Donald Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 6:58 AM
A powerful legacy to share with your sons, Connie. J'espère aussi cela pour eux! Qu'ils grandissent saine et sage, comme vous! I'm putting this in my favorites...MERCI! Season's Greetings, Mikki
Moraba Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 6:17 PM
Merci beaucoup, j'apprécie les aimables paroles Mikki :) :) Happy Holidays, Connie!!!
Moraba Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 1:08 AM
Merci. J'espère qu'ils grandissent pour le voir un jour.........
Mehta Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 11:48 AM
Well crafted dedication, Connie.
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