Elizabeth Jubenville Poet Free verse

To My Son With Love

I don’t know where you going
I don’t know what to do
I don’t know how to save
Your own life and you

So many years went by
When you left your home, your nest
I always wanted nothing more
For you to have the best

You let yourself so easy
You chose easy life to live
You are so good in heart
You have so much to give

Life is so fragile and frail
Life is like mist in the rain
We have only one life to live
Only one life, and never again

Why waste your life 
On things that make you weak
You are funny and smart
Handsome and unique

So many people love you
How hard it is to see
Your biggest fan of all
It is of course - me

You put yourself together
You turn your life around
The love you seeking for
One day I’m sure you’ll find                                       

I wish for you to have the best
To see the world, have fun
I wish for you the best in all
Simply because, you are my son

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Poet Destroyer A February 13, 2016 at 11:21 PM beth, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA Elizabeth Jubenville February 21, 2016 at 12:41 PM Thank you Linda, always pleasure to hear from you. I wasn't active on the site for long time... anyway, thank you for taking the time.... Love Ellie...

Arthur Vaso November 15, 2014 at 9:50 PM Hi there, I came back to read this again, as this poem resonates with me! :) Elizabeth Jubenville November 20, 2014 at 4:03 PM Thank you Arthur, I'm not proud that my son made poor choices in the past, but I am proud of him that he turned his life for better. Thank you again for coming back... :)

Richard Lamoureux November 9, 2014 at 2:57 AM A very moving piece. We want the best for our children. Many a child has been lifted by a mother's loving prayers. He is fortunate to have such a loving mom. Elizabeth Jubenville November 9, 2014 at 8:13 PM Richard, thank you very much for such a lovely comment...

Gerald Kithinji November 3, 2014 at 10:23 AM Touched me ... in many places! Elizabeth Jubenville November 3, 2014 at 10:25 AM Thank you so much ... Hugs Ellie...

Arthur Vaso November 2, 2014 at 7:13 PM That's both tearful and beautiful! Elizabeth Jubenville November 3, 2014 at 10:27 AM Thank you, your comment is very much appreciated .... Hugs Ellie...

Sandip Goswami October 28, 2014 at 10:31 AM Beautiful...It touched my my heart...Best wishes to you. Elizabeth Jubenville October 29, 2014 at 6:24 PM I appreciate your comment , Thank you very much..... :)