To My Son Treyvonn Anthony

In winter's chill, memories weigh heavy
A sorrow deeper than words can convey
Lost in the echoes of a silent cry
My baby son, a star in the sky

The festive lights, a bitter reminder
Of a love that time couldn't be kinder
In this season of joy, my heart bears the ache
Yearning for moments only memories can make

Through the tears that silently fall
I navigate a world that feels so small
Yet, within the pain resilience grows
A whispered strength, a love that still shows

Though darkness lingers in this time of cheer
Your spirit shines a beacon so clear
In the quiet of night I find solace in tears
For my baby son in my heart, forever near

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Date: 1/22/2024 3:33:00 PM
Sorry for such a tragic loss, BC. He only sends blessings for you now, but forever remains for reunion. :o/
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/17/2024 5:59:00 AM
Thank you Arlo!:)
Date: 1/22/2024 10:27:00 AM
aww Brenda this is so so sad, what a wonderful tribute to your son, i can't imagine the pain of losing a child:-( hugs Jan xx
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/17/2024 5:58:00 AM
Jan thank you I do appreciate the read and comment !:)
Date: 1/22/2024 10:21:00 AM
Brenda, I can't imagine such a depth of sorrow. A star in your eyes and heart, he still shines for you. Hugs, sweet friend.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/17/2024 5:58:00 AM
Lin…thank you much appreciated my friend!:)
Date: 1/22/2024 10:17:00 AM
A beautiful tribute to your son..
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/17/2024 5:58:00 AM
Thank you Silent One!:)
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