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To My Pretty Wife

To my pretty wife You're simply the best All of africa knows it We're blessed with a son From the sun

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Probir Gupta

Date: 9/28/2016 12:13:00 AM

So nice ...

Keith Logan

Date: 9/27/2016 4:23:00 PM

Simply the best not only conjures up images of Tina Turner but is the slightest of pictures. Truly is a much stronger expression. You're truly the best

Keith Logan
Date: 9/28/2016 3:53:00 AM

I forgot this poem type has strict syllable count... easily fixed by placing "and" at the start of that line.

Keith Logan
Date: 9/28/2016 3:48:00 AM

PS: I would drop "of" from the third line. In my humble opinion the poem is stronger without it.