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To My Pretty Wife

To my pretty wife
You're simply the best
All of africa knows it
We're blessed with a son
From the sun

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Probir Gupta

September 28, 2016 at 12:13 AM

So nice ...

Keith Logan

September 27, 2016 at 4:23 PM

Simply the best not only conjures up images of Tina Turner but is the slightest of pictures. Truly is a much stronger expression. You're truly the best

Keith Logan

September 28, 2016 at 3:53 AM

I forgot this poem type has strict syllable count... easily fixed by placing "and" at the start of that line.

Keith Logan

September 28, 2016 at 3:48 AM

PS: I would drop "of" from the third line. In my humble opinion the poem is stronger without it.