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To My Late Brother

To my late brother, your suicide ripped my heart from its moorings. Our baby boy of the 1960's, you must of been so lonely, selling your cabin on the wooded acres with a brook behind it. Leaving your home state to join a woman who dismissed you. The romantic rejection you suffered would of passed. Your blue eyes could of smiled again. Goodbye quiet one, ashes for the earth you loved, a hurt upon my soul.

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Date: 9/26/2024 1:12:00 PM
So sorry for your loss. Some people don’t recover from heartbreak.
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Date: 9/16/2024 8:31:00 PM
The pain and the hurt is palpable, Regina. Comfort and Consolation, Gershon
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Regina Elliott
Date: 9/17/2024 4:17:00 AM
Thank you so much, good friend. I really appreciate your kindness. Shalom

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