Ravindra K Kapoor Poet Romanticism

To My Dream Love

Last night it was raining,
The raindrops were chattering on the window glass
and the fragrance of soil was murmuring in my ear
the fragrance of my distant friend
Coming out from the refreshing water of the lake
Her body shining in the moonlit night
as if the body curves were glowing 
Like the hill top and the velley down there
in the magical light of rising Moon .

But alas, it was a dream only
I wanted to keep my eyes closed for a while
Thinking that it was not a dream and the Goddess of Love
will come out of the lake water and will
put her warm kisses on my lips. 
 
Alas ! it was a dream only …….
But a memorable dream
In which I could see the beauty of your refreshing body
In the showering light of full moon
What a rare experience to witness 
The beauty of a charming and revealing body 
In the glowing light of heavenly Moon.

Thank you my friend for giving me such a beautiful dream.

Ravindra

Kanpur India  24th Sept 2006

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John Freeman February 6, 2010 at 10:54 AM Congratulations on this awesome featured presentation this week. Ravindra. Good job. Sincerely, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 4, 2010 at 7:11 PM Congrats Ravindra on your featured poem on the Soup this week.. an excellent write and a beautiful tale in poetry... thankxxx for your many splendid comments so precious to me on my poetry always.. luv.. Linda-Marie

Janette Fisher February 2, 2010 at 11:42 AM Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette

Sue Mason February 1, 2010 at 4:08 PM Beautiful and true to your romantic form. Great imagery here, Ravindra. Excellent selection to be featured this week here at the Soup! Congratulations!!

James Fraser February 1, 2010 at 1:17 PM Many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James

Carrie Richards February 1, 2010 at 10:46 AM What a glorious poem, Ravindra!! A lovely one to be featured this week. Congratulations! ~ Carrie Ravindra K Kapoor February 18, 2025 at 5:32 AM Thank you once again for your precious words dear friend Carrie. Many years have passed when I had started writing on this wonderful canvas of Poetry Soup. To day I am reviewing my earlier poems and wonderful friends like you. Your poems have always motivated and inspired me and even today I feel the same inspiration. Thank you df for some of yours valuable and matchless poems and contributions on PS. All good wishes df Carrie for you and your family. With best wishes always....Ravindra 18th Fab. 2025

Ann Rich February 1, 2010 at 5:21 AM Contrats to you on being featured by PoetrySoup this week. Keep pen and paper on hand & never say never! AR

Carol Sunshine Brown February 1, 2010 at 3:57 AM Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Ravindra. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Daniel Cheeseman February 1, 2010 at 2:50 AM Beautiful, a well deserved feature poem and may your dreams come true, Daniel

Simone Segal February 1, 2010 at 1:16 AM My dear friend Ravindra, a beautiful poem, such beauty in your words, congrats being featured, love Simone

Douglas Ace January 29, 2010 at 5:08 AM A very sensual and imaginative piece. Your wording paints clear pictures across my mind. Nicely done. Lightwalker

David Byrne January 23, 2010 at 8:24 PM Love the last verse!

Sara Kendrick January 21, 2010 at 6:24 AM Very romantic write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for the comments on my Beatlemania lyric not so easy to write. Sara

Dean Masciarelli January 12, 2010 at 12:09 PM Hi Ravindra Dreams can be so amazing at times and they can seem so real and vivid because our dreams allows our imagination to wander into such a splendid place that is peaceful and serene and you have done a wonderful job in expressing yourself through this poem in a magical way. Thank you for sharing your gift and your talent with all of us here in poetry soup, I thoroughly enjoyed my visit today, :) Dean

Mary Meade Stephenson December 16, 2009 at 5:19 PM A beautiful piece you have penned here Ravindra...vivid imagery captures and pulls the reader in....poignant and eloquent...thanks so much for sharing! Many thanks for taking the time to read my writes. Your always kind comments are much appreciated as well! Have a blessed day~Mary Ravindra K Kapoor February 18, 2025 at 5:19 AM Many years have passed when you left your precious words df Mary Meade. While reviewing my earlier poems I gratefully acknowledge your precious words df Mary. With best wishes always...Ravindra 18th Feb. 2025

Florentina Laic December 16, 2009 at 4:04 AM Wonderful picture, love is omnipresent and have an incredible dream power. AI wish a happy, wonderful Christmas, full of joy and love! Florentina

Brian Strand December 12, 2009 at 1:22 AM I like the inner monoku Ravindra, if you place the kyrielle together.. 'Last night it was raining, But alas, it was a dream only' Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Shirley Madeleine December 5, 2009 at 9:59 AM Sensual, passionate, emmotionaly. Great poem, love it.

Shirley Madeleine November 24, 2009 at 12:13 PM Nicely done, this is a great poem. Love it. Keep on writing. Thanks for your lovely comments.

Sue Mason November 20, 2009 at 4:18 PM Another beautiful write from you Ravindra!! Hope you bring lots more to the Soup!

Doris Culverhouse November 18, 2009 at 11:06 AM sensual poem, nicely penned.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 16, 2009 at 5:36 AM Lovely and descriptive Ravindra.. welcome aboard the Soup and hope to read many more innovative writings from your pen.. Any help needed just ask... will try to help u ...happy Monday... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Carol Sunshine Brown November 16, 2009 at 4:57 AM I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ravindra. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Rp Kumari November 15, 2009 at 2:54 PM imaginative word play, love it