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To My Brother

We were kids, we had our squabbles 
I'd have a fit, and run to tattle
A few disputes, a fib, a shout
Until mom would come to sort it out

Untangling kids she'd gladly strangle...
She'd send us off, to think, or pout

But you were my star,… so tall you stood…
And  .. 'though I tried to reach that far 
I never could-

Oh sure, I was little, and had laughed
at my attempts to do a task
I'd blow a gasket, but soon I slipped
into  my teens...

And then so fast, the time had passed
and you were off to see the world-
And how I longed, to have you back.  
 
While looking back, I see more clearly
and loved you dearly, for being there...
For being fair, for being you...

And something else.  Did I tell you?...
You were my idol
You were my hero, you made me proud
I'll say it now, I'll say it loud
that you still do.
 
Did you know…. My darling brother,
all my life, as we were growing
I looked to you, to make me climb
a little higher, and all that time
I saw the world, a little better
I looked to you, a little older
to make me try a little harder

For, I was shy...and you were not,
You gave me goals, to reach the spot...
To try my best, to reach the gold
As we got older, it was so clear.
And we grew near, so very near
Which says a lot.
 
You were my star, and you still are
 You helped me know, you helped me grow
Did you know you had inspired
that little spark…

Did you know how I much admired?
How much the years gave me the fire
To keep alive that little fire, and how I
….strive
            …… to toe the mark ?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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A   Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 9:57 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your awesome sibling win. XOX - LINDA -
Kimathi Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 3:13 AM
A very wonderful dedication to your brother!! ;-) Congrats Carrie, on your top placement in the contest!!! ;-)
A  Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 8:27 AM
Hi Carrie,, Congratulations on your lovely win. Love the subject..... SKAT **
Scars Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 5:21 PM
Carrie, a lovely poem about your brother! -*smiles*-luloo
Gentry Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 5:19 PM
Awesome poem Carrie. Really touched me deeply. Congratulations on win in the contest. A 7
Allison Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 5:16 PM
He sounds absolutely wonderful Carrie:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 4:25 PM
Carrie Richards , congratulations on your placement on my “When Older Siblings or Younger Step In”... contest. A wonderful tribute to your brother. Sounds like my home : ) Hugs Eve
Onclaud Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 4:16 PM
so warmly done, carrie.. high five and congrats on your stunning win!..huggs
Brown Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 1:19 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "Holding out for a Hero" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Taylor Avatar
May 6, 2012 at 8:31 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Carrie. Beautiful tribute, my friend. Kudos. hugs, Ralph
Burch Avatar
May 6, 2012 at 3:54 AM
:) I got one too!! Well Done Carrie!! Congrats on your win!! Great tribute!! big hugs , love ya deb
Quigley Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 9:12 PM
He sounds like on hellava guy Carrie. Well written
Johnson Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 6:27 PM
Lovely expression of sibling rivaly and love. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Guzzi Avatar
March 22, 2012 at 6:01 PM
Wow what a great write to your BIG brother I hope you showed it to him. Congrad's Light & Love
Brown Avatar
March 22, 2012 at 8:04 AM
Congratulations on your win in Joe's "The Contest Contest" Carrie. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 10:23 AM
straight from the heart, carrie.... congrats on your special win!:) huggs!
Williams Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 8:03 AM
Carrie congrats on your win,great dedication..David
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 2:37 AM
A wonderful win congratulations Carrie,I miss my big brother so much still xx
Johnson Avatar
March 20, 2012 at 7:34 PM
Oh I love this Carrie. Love between siblings is so special. I still miss my big brothers and now my little one is gone too. Congratulations on having such a brother to look up to and recognizing your good fortune. Love, Joyce
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