Constance La France Poet Rhyme

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To My Beauty, Constanza

In deep hills green we lay my dear,
I dream of rain, of snow falling;
of lakes-  the sky and wind calling.

Our time so sweet, so fine each year,
my sweet beauty never be gone;
just love me, let no darkness yawn.

With you, I knew such joy-  oh tear!
Shadows beneath the soil, whispers,
of magic-  each dance, all chapters.

We had this love's embrace-  oh fear!
Heartbreak in my spirit and soul,
broken, our dreams to death's keyhole.
 
Will death just take-  will God just hear?
Oh please let our love soar endless,
in peace let our love be ceaseless.

In deep hills green we lay my dear,
Our time so sweet, so fine each year.
With you I knew such joy -  oh tear!
We had this love's embrace-  oh fear!
Will death just take-  will God just hear?

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November 19, 2017


Poetry/Constanza/To My Beauty, Constanza
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Joanna Daniel November 21, 2017 at 7:39 AM Beautiful and pulls the heartstrings, Constance, very well written:)

Connie Marcum Wong November 21, 2017 at 3:23 AM Constance, I could feel the powerful bitter sweet emotions grip my heart in this lovely Constanza! It is so important to have the last Monorhyme stanza leave an impact and you have managed to create it beautifully! This is going into my Faves! I hope to see this on the winner's list. Cheers, Connie : )

Gracie Woodsinger November 19, 2017 at 8:59 PM Broken Wings, your poem is beautiful. I could fairly see the setting you described, in such picturesque language too. It is full of symbolism too, and captured my imagination at once.

James Swartz November 19, 2017 at 5:50 PM This is very wonderfully written. So creative how you set it up for the last stanza. Such beauty and sadness just like in life. Thank you for this great poem.