To My Beautiful One - Tell Me

The fine, blue dress with white spots
overemphasized the shape of your body
and beauty,
but your beautiful green eyes
just like the dark grey clouds
in the sky, were about to cry,
Oh, My Beautiful One,
Tell me
who made you feel and look so unhappy,
Was it anybody else or me?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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September 10, 2021 at 12:07 PM
It was nice but I felt in was missing something. Keep up the good work.
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