To Minichu Or Not To Minuchu

A complicated form,
but something new is always welcome news to me -
not the norm.

I wasn't sure,
but thought I'd have to try and see...
some more...

It's done -
actually,
fun!

A complicated form, 
but thought I'd have to try and see -
fun!

written 13th October for Mohan's Minichu on writing contest
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Fowler Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 6:18 AM
This is a fun form Jack and you penned it well. Congratulations on the win! Linda
Chutani Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 3:42 AM
Jack, congrats for your placement and giving me your lovely feedback on Minichu format. Best. Mohan.
Callus Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 1:09 AM
I like your take on this new poetry form, Jack...and yes, it sounds like you were having fun:) Regards // paul
Deremer Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 1:03 PM
Thank you for sharing your work.
Kendrick Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 12:57 PM
Reads like a good contender. I like the lines that you have penned. Way to go. Thanks for all the visits. Sara
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