To Live the Wind's Joy

“The wind rides in solitude
In her diaphanous delight.
Her skirts brush eternity
To gather the stars of night.”

Forever the stars she gathers
will magically move in the sky.
Their dance is the style of Glitter-bug
as they shimmy till morning is nigh.

The man in the moon watches them.
You’ll see how brightly he glows
to see those shimmying stars
on nights when his full face he shows.

And we, the witnessing earthlings,
whose eyes on the night’s sky gaze,
can more than just view the beauty
of nature’s most wondrous ways.

We also can live the wind’s joy
as her skirts among the stars twirl,
for her talents extend to valleys and hills.
Over all the world she can whirl.

Poets, look up to the heavens.
With imagination embrace
the dance of the stars in the heavens
while feeling the wind on your face.

May 5, 2021 (using Stanza 4 given by Joseph May for my first stanza)
For Joseph May's Choose Your Form Poetry Contest
For the 'ALL YOURS (JUN 1)' Poetry Contest of Brian Strand
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Allison Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 2:26 PM
Dropping back with many congrats on your win:-) hug jan xx
Goldsmith Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 1:08 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. Love your line, "Poets, look up to the heavens." They Do. Have a blessed day/weekend....................
May Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 5:32 AM
A wonderful dance of the stars Andrea, Congrats on your win
Edmonds  Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 5:19 PM
So beautiful Andrea, you so deserved the win, congratulations… Belle
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 4:32 PM
Congratulations on your first placement Andrea. I knew this fave of mine would place high. Blessings xxoo
Evans Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 12:32 PM
Congratulations. Such a beautiful piece of writing and superb imagery.
Ligon Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 8:54 AM
Ooh, I love your Glitter-bug dance of the stars. Your whole poem is beautiful. Congratulations!
Gondolf Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 6:21 AM
Andrea, I love your last stanza, it speaks to me. Congrats on your win. Hugs, John
Daniel Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 6:18 AM
A beautiful moving write, Andrea, congratulations:)
Jayasankar Avatar
May 7, 2021 at 9:41 AM
This is just awesome Andrea.. a FAV... Last stanza so beautiful... Hugs... ~ Ani
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 6, 2021 at 2:30 PM
This poem is so lovely and enchanting Andrea. A fave! Love it. Blessings xxoo
Mcintosh Avatar
May 6, 2021 at 11:19 AM
This is glorious... a WONDER of a write... Love it so. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
Won Avatar
May 6, 2021 at 4:17 AM
You have such a way with words <3
Buhagiar Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 10:58 PM
Excellent poetry.
Horsman Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 10:07 PM
Could feel the wind as the words flow along so lovely..Wonderful poetry Andrea sure Joseph will love it.
Wolf Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 5:20 PM
What a wondrous write, Andrea. The last stanza, especially, so bracing, so refreshing. ~ Feeling the tingle, Gershon
Pandit Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 4:05 PM
Delightful write Andrea. I don't think he wants you to break up the stanza--so you did it right. All given prompts I found are lovely.
Allison Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 3:28 PM
a joy to read your lines which compliment Joseph's stanza so perfectly, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Turner Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 1:21 PM
Well this "witnessing earthling" most certainly observes and he also loves your poem, Andrea. I am sure Joseph will too:)
Dietrich Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 1:55 PM
thanks, I sure hope so.
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