To Lighten the Load

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( John 17: 6 ” I have made your name known”)
( Psalm 65:2 “O Hearer of prayer”)
( Hebrews 5:7” Christ offered up petitions with tears”)
(James 1:13 "When under trial, let no one say: 'I am being tried by God.'"

To lighten the load, I suggest stop adding to the stack. Next, are there things you could sell, return … perhaps send back? Perhaps your load is more challenging, than just, a lot of things. Perhaps load is a lack of funds, and all the stress … that brings. Perhaps your load is more serious, involves illness or death. Or involves life’s uncertainties that takes away … your breath. Perhaps this, or perhaps that, but one thing I know for sure! Know the name of “someone special,” who’ll help you … to endure. His name, a name Christ always knew, a name that he made known.* Psalm 83:18 verse where, Jehovah’s name … is shown. *The “hearer of prayer,” Jehovah, is God’s personal name. Not responsible for your loads, so please … God never blame. To lighten loads, may I suggest, Jehovah, get to know. Christ in tears, called on Jehovah,* same trust … I pray we’ll show.

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Date: 6/24/2022 1:13:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem quite a bit Barbara!
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Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 6/25/2022 6:46:00 PM
James, i appreciate your comment, and you visiting me.Shared truth, about my stuff, and my faith in Christ and His Father Jehovah. Thanks again, now I'll visit you, my friend.
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