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To Light the Patio

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					.
				    Blow
				The winds
			     Thru the trees
				Undulating
				   Breeze

					.
					.
				    Light
				 At night
			       Shining bright
			        On the path
				    Glows

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Denis Barter

September 3, 2016 at 4:03 PM

A clever play on words Betty, that does you credit. I haven't the time to try it myself right now as I'm having to keep the garden watered. No rain expected for days yet, and the sun still shines from a cloudless sky! I see signs of improvement in your work, which is good. I have several pieces in the process of being written, but my mind wanders to other matters, as you might guess. Fall will soon be here. Going to post an Acrostic later. Now to relax awhile. Fondest regards. Denis.

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