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To Light the Patio

. . Blow The winds Thru the trees Undulating Breeze . . Light At night Shining bright On the path Glows

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Denis Barter

Date: 9/3/2016 4:03:00 PM

A clever play on words Betty, that does you credit. I haven't the time to try it myself right now as I'm having to keep the garden watered. No rain expected for days yet, and the sun still shines from a cloudless sky! I see signs of improvement in your work, which is good. I have several pieces in the process of being written, but my mind wanders to other matters, as you might guess. Fall will soon be here. Going to post an Acrostic later. Now to relax awhile. Fondest regards. Denis.