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Even after writing it, I'm not sure if this poem is shallow or deep...

Population Control Is on a roll In the West. Elsewhere, however, Babies are-- Price-less.

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Susan Gentry

Date: 4/8/2018 9:08:00 PM

Clever! Well said.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/8/2018 9:10:00 PM

Alright! Glad you liked it, Susan!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 3/1/2018 8:13:00 AM

shallow + deep = art (I'd hang that on my wall; suits my mental decor) xomo

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/1/2018 2:00:00 PM

Alright...Thank you, Maureen! Maybe I'm actually getting somewhere---in large measure due to you and others commenting on my stuff and encouraging me...Blessings, :) gw

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 2/28/2018 10:58:00 PM

I like the rhyme of west with priceless very unexpected! - michelle faulkner

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/1/2018 2:02:00 PM

Thanks for your kind words, Michelle!...btw: Perhaps it was unexpected, because the two words don't quite rhyme. (Priceless would need a 't' at the end). And yet, they're quite close to rhyming---kind of like a fastball just off the plate that the hitter goes for...Only in this case, it doesn't produce a strike-out!! Thanks, again.