To Know You

i know you
              almost
as well as
             i know myself

over the years
        i have learned
                  your moods
                         your face
each expression
                  each crease
                    each worry line,
                      each crinkle around your eyes.
where they began
                 why they are there

would i erase them
            if i could?

never...

for if i could
     if they were no longer a part of you...
        it would take away
            your past
                and mine..
                  and ours together....

perhaps there are different..
          more delicate ways of saying
              that life with you is good to live...

                 but knowing you,
                      as well as I do...  
               
                           i know this will do









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 Carrie R.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 24, 2013 at 7:24 PM
Carrie, congratulations with your poem on Andrea's, favorite list. always~ Linda
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April 23, 2013 at 6:31 AM
Carrie, I hope my wife feels the same about my wrinkles...when I get them! ;) Congrats with this lovely poem!
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April 23, 2013 at 3:14 AM
Love this poem. Congrats on your win!
Mannan Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 10:44 PM
I loved it. Many congrats dear friend.
Robbins Aka Gonzo Avatar
January 6, 2010 at 9:24 AM
A great and well written and warm write of exceptance. Perfect in every sense great job
Owens Avatar
January 5, 2010 at 6:06 PM
Beautiful poem...enjoyed...Good luck in the contest....Marty
Austin Avatar
January 5, 2010 at 11:16 AM
Beautiful and sensitive. Good luck in the contest. Love, daver
Brown Avatar
January 5, 2010 at 11:07 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Carrie. May your writing take you to new heights each and every day. Love, Carol
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January 4, 2010 at 11:00 PM
Awesome! Carrie! A winner in my book. Good luck on the contest. Happy new year, Caroline.
Craig Avatar
January 4, 2010 at 10:41 PM
I love it!!!
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January 4, 2010 at 10:14 PM
Carrie, gee, in a totally different style from mine, this one reminds me of my own entry! I just love how you dealt with the topic of real and enduring love. This is just wonderful and one of my favs!! And I would enter that one contest but I just have no clue how I'd do it and I'm back to work now after the holidays. No time, no time, GRRRR (andrea)
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January 4, 2010 at 9:55 PM
Wonderful structure filled with beautiful words. Wow, best of luck in the contest and I think you don't need it with this powerful write...Raul
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