To Kneel Down

I'd propose to you, but my knees are shot
   To kneel down hurts me a lot

Anyway, what I'd rather do 
   is pop the question with my arms around you
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Rodrigues Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 10:59 AM
Whatever style that a golden heart presents..the one that be true to him, her heart will accept.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 5:51 PM
If you want you can repost it with yours :) Thanks
Wolf Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 1:48 PM
Your comment is far more poignant and far better than what I wrote. Why not post it? It's great! ~ gw's opinion
There Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 3:04 PM
Well, anyway, this sounds absolutely lovely and romantic, Gershon <3
Wolf Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 5:02 PM
Yes, anyway! Love your comment and thanks for the appreciation, H.T! Smiles, Gershon
Sands Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 12:58 PM
Oh, this is so sweet. I love it Gershon :)
Wolf Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 1:27 PM
The poem, no sweeter than your comment. Thanks a million, Heidi! Warmest wishes, Gershon
Krutsinger Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 12:13 PM
Such sweet innocence to this one!
Wolf Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 1:26 PM
Aw, such a sweet comment too. Thanks, Caren. Smiles, Ge;rshon
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 12:06 PM
Hello Gershon Wolf, you know not all men propose the way you are comfortable doing it. Be creative as to how to do it. Good luck. Have a nice day my friend.
Wolf Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 1:26 PM
Thanks for the support on this proposal, Darlene! :) gw
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