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To Keep Foever

It's funny how I hide in the seam of your smile Or the frown lines of worry on your face You carry a bit of me in your pocket The sea glass worn smooth And now the color of grey stone It's funny how I carry you inside my purse A love note kept to find on random days I see you in the laundry laid on my bed washed earlier while I was at work and brought in fresh with the smell of you It's funny how you feel the times I wake too early knowing I get restless with thoughts And I roll quietly out of bed so not to wake you to sit and breathe the morning emptiness while I listen to your peaceful dreaming It's funny how I write poetry you don't read but is written for you anyway While walking the beach in the morning To look forward to your smile in greetings whenever I return from the places I go It's funny how we met on a balcony in Mexico And took a couple years to acknowledge That we were smitten with each other How our love grew on that bus ride in search Of our at last partner to keep forever

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Date: 2/11/2022 11:21:00 PM
This is filled with love in every line. I especially love “ I see you in the laundry laid on my bed washed earlier while I was at work and brought in fresh with the smell of you”. What woman doesn’t love a man who does the laundry? Beautiful Jeanne. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Have a very happy Valentine’s Day. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 2/9/2022 12:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your high placing win and thank you for entering your wonderful poem in this contest! I hope you have a wonderful and happy Valentine's Day! ~BJ
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Date: 12/21/2021 11:03:00 AM
How funny love can be. A wonderful story/write. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
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Date: 12/7/2021 11:56:00 AM
so sweetly romantic! you made laundry poetic! :)
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 12/7/2021 8:02:00 PM
funny how that works when you are in love, lol

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