To Island Bay

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There actually is an Island Bay (resort) in Key Largo, Florida...

We're on our way to Island Bay To sun and swim, relax and play Canoe and sail, perhaps to fish We're on our way to Island Bay Dine out in style: fine wine, sorbet Explore new trails, vacation's wish We're on our way to Island Bay To sun and swim, relax and play Iambic Tetrameter

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Ronald D Thompson

Date: 8/22/2019 4:18:00 PM

I want to go to Island Bay! Exquisitely written. Best wishes, Ron

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/22/2019 8:38:00 PM

Me, too. All I need is a little cash... LOL. :) gw

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 8/21/2019 11:32:00 PM

G'day Gershon … seems the place to be, especially with the chilly weather we're having. I like this style of poetry. Well done Gershon - Lindsay

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/22/2019 10:19:00 AM

Appreciate your kind words about my attempts to write poetry. All the best, Lindsay! ~ gw

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/21/2019 8:41:00 PM

nice rhythm and flow...i wish i could write like that...rhyme is tough for me, you penned this one perfectly, now i want to see island bay :) hugs

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/21/2019 9:14:00 PM

Oh, and I wish I could write as you do in that poetic free verse style... Well guess what: You CAN pen rhymes, and I CAN write free verse. If we will it, 'tis no dream... (soup mail please). Thanks for all of your encouragement, Sandy! :) gw