To Her,

I still hold tight that imagined note
The one with words I never wrote

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Caren Krutsinger

October 24, 2021 at 12:48 AM

This says so much in merely two well-written lines Jerry.

Jerry Hackett

November 1, 2021 at 11:53 AM

Thanks, her name is Ellen.

Susan Ashley

October 19, 2021 at 7:16 PM

Oh, Jerry, so much left unsaid.. poignant beauty spills from your wistful pen. An exquisite couplet. Congratulations for your excellent win in Milton's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Jerry Hackett

October 20, 2021 at 8:45 AM

Thanks, Her name is Ellen.

Paulette Calasibetta

October 18, 2021 at 12:20 PM

Jerry, congratulations on your placement in the contest~a heartbreaking theme, but well penned. Blessings, Paulette

Jerry Hackett

October 19, 2021 at 12:52 AM

Thank you and now I hold tight your nice words.

Jan Allison

October 18, 2021 at 12:01 PM

Such a touching piece Jerry, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Jerry Hackett

October 19, 2021 at 12:52 AM

Thank you and now I hold tight your nice words.

Ann Peck

October 18, 2021 at 8:21 AM

Oh, so poignant, Jerry. It's beautiful. Congratulations on your high placing.

Jerry Hackett

October 19, 2021 at 12:53 AM

Thank you and now I hold tight your nice words.

Line Gauthier

October 18, 2021 at 7:09 AM

poignant ~ congrats on your well deserved win, Jerry ~

Jerry Hackett

October 19, 2021 at 12:53 AM

Thank you Line, I hope you are well.

Beata Agustin

October 18, 2021 at 5:35 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Jerry Hackett

October 19, 2021 at 12:53 AM

Thank you and now I hold tight your nice words.

Christuraj Alex

October 17, 2021 at 11:51 PM

Wow! so wonderful poetic lines. Congratulations!

Jerry Hackett

October 18, 2021 at 5:19 AM

Thank you, have a great day.

L Milton Hankins

October 17, 2021 at 8:18 PM

Congratulations, Jerry, for your honorable placement in my recent contest out of fifty entries. I liked your poem very much.

Jerry Hackett

October 18, 2021 at 5:19 AM

Thanks

Heidi Sands

October 8, 2021 at 6:08 AM

Good one ! :)

Jerry Hackett

October 8, 2021 at 6:22 AM

Thank you, i'm going to tweak it a bit for a contest. I hope you get a minute to read "Dear Ellen", it is from that poem I pulled the lines. If you like White Paper then Dear Ellen will fill in the blanks.

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