To Hell With This

For one night only satan decides, to offer me a look around hell
An open house, I’m able to walk in freely roam about come back out 
No strings attached no tricks, or punishment 
I ask God will he hold it against me, he says no, for you only look
So with nothing to lose I enter, albeit with some trepidation 
But this soon dispels, when I see what’s on offer
Wealth beyond imagination at my disposal, to do with as I please 
Most beautiful women, tailor made for every fantasy, all mine to indulge 
I don’t even have to marry any of them, 
Every delicacy, food, drink, and drugs, constantly on tap
No hangovers or consequences, no need to get up early ever again for work, 
or indeed work at all for that matter 
I do recognize some of history’s most nasty bastards 
But they pose no threat, just go about there own business 
Even some people I knew and liked, reside here looking extremely happy 
I’m confused, if this is hell, how can heaven be any better 
There’s more than enough here, to satisfy me for eternity 
To be honest, I don’t even want to come back out 
But I must the tour of hell is over
I turn to God and ask, can I have a look into heaven now 
You already have, judging by your face, God says in jest
Ok why not, let’s go inside, taking me by the hand,
I cannot tell you what I’ve seen, not because It’s disallowed 
More because I don’t know how, 
Honestly it’s indescribable, beyond all human imagination 
And I am only human, I think I proved that, down in hell. 

By David Kavanagh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 4/12/2021 8:35:00 PM
Well done!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 4/12/2021 11:32:00 PM
Thanks Kim, I’m delighted you get where I’m coming from, cheers David
Date: 4/11/2021 4:07:00 PM
Only Human Me 2 David Of flesh and blood Hell of a life Aint it hey
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 4/12/2021 9:47:00 AM
Yes David to me to indescribable because no one actually really knows.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 4/12/2021 2:25:00 AM
what do we expect to find in heaven Christopher; that for some has already been achieved here on earth, that’s why I use the metaphor indescribable. We’re aspiring for something beyond human comprehension, don’t get me wrong I’m not rubbishing the belief of heaven, we all long for something better, maybe it’s peace permanence and perfection, or something more than hope, cheers David
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