Sandra Adams Poet Free verse

To Go On

how can i covet the day
when it doesn't belong to me?

i thirst for you,
more so than the day,
am i wrong to do so?

my sun rises,
but only through your eyes
and i see your smile
worn by the moon
on cold endless nights,
but i thirst for you
more so than the day.

am i wrong?

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Deborah Shiells May 8, 2014 at 5:27 PM Hi Sandra, Nice way of expressing, and your imagery is outstanding!! This is a beauty Sandra. Thank you so much for sharing this write with us. Peace, Deborah

Mark Peterson November 20, 2013 at 11:43 AM These feelings are ineffable. So how did you manage to describe them so well? Sandra Adams November 20, 2013 at 4:13 PM i do not know Mark...my muse just sings what she wants to sing...thank you :)

Andrea Dietrich November 19, 2013 at 9:07 PM Unless you are speaking about God, then I know you are showing your love of nature. Sandra Adams November 20, 2013 at 4:10 PM not of God...not of nature...but yes of a love...

Andrea Dietrich November 19, 2013 at 9:07 PM another wonderful poem. I think it is fictional though, am I wrong? haha. Sandra Adams November 20, 2013 at 4:11 PM hmmm i don't know...are you wrong? Thank you Andrea :) hugs

Poet Tacito November 19, 2013 at 10:55 AM Of course the day belongs to you! That's the whole point of being presented with the gift of WAKING UP! You can do the math from there. ;-) Real love shouldn't never hurt like this...Excellent thoughts in this writing. Sandra Adams November 19, 2013 at 11:24 AM thank you Drake...awake and blessed with the beautiful rise of another day...one of the greatest things of my job is getting to watch a new sky unfold each day! hugs :)