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To Get Her Love I Tried

i love my lovely wife wanted to relieve her strife that day was Sunday that was my holiday with smile i went to cook so chicken in kitchen i took when i stared cut chilli being crazy doing like a silly blood oozed from my finger i decided not to linger though onions were sliced yet vegetables to be diced at that time my wife came she had given me no fame my thoughts are dried so my feelings were fried then like a baby i cried to get her love i tried Note:- Inspired by one of the friends of P.S.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/16/2015 8:21:00 PM

You sure do love your wife. I hope she values that love!!

Bl Devnath
Date: 3/17/2015 8:57:00 AM

Thanks for your comment, my lovely friend,bl

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/14/2015 2:43:00 PM

Aww...such a precious poem, a dedicated hubby making dinner for his lovely wife. No matter what, it's always the thought that counts and you did your best!

Bl Devnath
Date: 3/14/2015 2:58:00 PM

Thanks my lovely smiling friend for your smiling comment. Loved always,bl

Jan Allison

Date: 3/13/2015 7:09:00 PM

I love it when my husband cooks for me - he has been an angel with my dad dying and has been cooking to make sure I have been eating well:-) I am careful when cooking with chilli and onions - make sure hands stay well away from my eyes lol !A 7 from me:-) Hugs jan xx

Bl Devnath
Date: 3/14/2015 1:06:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your comment and for 7. Loved always,bl

Jason Barth

Date: 3/13/2015 4:40:00 PM

That's poem says so much in so little words

Bl Devnath
Date: 3/14/2015 1:05:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your comment. Loved always,bl