To Gaze On Beauty

Beyond green meadows, humming birds slow flight
To gaze on beauty as she passes by
When my love comes, she brings a brighter light
And jealous stars dim with a whispered sigh
To be lonely when my lover is gone
As she came to me when my need was King
She filled my eyes, a lushous fiery dawn
And took my spirit from Winter to Spring
Did you not see the sun's red setting blush,
When she took my chalice filled with its pain?
Opened my arms for her passionate rush
And led me through darkness, out of the rain

  Oh dear love, with eyes of a darker hue
  You tell my heart why God created you


9/1/16 Contest English Sonnet 3
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Thomas Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 6:00 PM
What a smile you've put on my face with this beautiful poem Frederic. Vivid and touching.
Kendrick Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 5:17 PM
Your English Sonnet was awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara
Lawless Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 8:11 AM
Way to go Frederick...this slowed my, stopped me, and beckoned me to return to it and ponder its depth.
Leiser Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 10:29 PM
Very beautiful sonnet, Frederic! So romantic, too. Congrats on your top win :)
Scars Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 6:52 PM
Frederic, this is so romatic dear friend, congrats on your top placement :)-luloo
Roper Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 6:39 PM
Frederic, congratulations on your 1st place win, beautiful written . Hugs Eve
Leiser Avatar
September 1, 2016 at 7:10 PM
Very lovely sonnet, Frederic! Enjoyed it very much. Good luck in the contest:)
Turner Avatar
September 1, 2016 at 5:28 PM
Frederic my poetic friend. I must admit I read it over and over a few times, I think you are talking about a sunrise. At least that is my interpretation. It's hidden in there somewhere. But the line,"She filled my eyes, a lush fiery dawn" I think is the clue. loved the sonnet my friend.
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