To Friendly Face and Open Door

In a moment, in a twinkling of an eye at the last trumpet:
for the trumpet shall blow, and the dead shall be raised up
incorruptible, and we shall be changed.
—1 Cor 15:52

To Friendly Face and Open Door

Spring of daffodils and time change,
of snowy Bradford pears and I,
to friendly face and open door;
ecstatic at the doctored lift.*

Of snowy Bradford pears and I,
an hour that cannot be reclaimed.
Ecstatic at the doctored lift.
Latter smile on church-countenance.

An hour that cannot be reclaimed,
and thus the gimp has no inkling.
Latter smile on church-countenance.
Pain perished in twinkling moment.

And thus the gimp has no inkling,
saved from the click clack of a clock.
Pain perished in twinkling moment,
in glory of Great Physician.**

Saved, from the click clack of a clock,
to friendly face and open door.
in glory of Great Physician,
Spring of daffodils and time change.

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*lift - elevator and metaphor
**Great Physician - Jesus Christ
***non-rhyming pantoum
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Hind Avatar
March 13, 2025 at 11:32 PM
I hope all your pains are healed! So inspiring and well written. :)
Tor Avatar
March 9, 2025 at 11:04 PM
Wonderfully written Kim. Truth in this one...
Rodrigues Avatar
March 10, 2025 at 5:47 AM
Thank you, Mike!
Mckeithan Avatar
March 9, 2025 at 4:46 PM
Nicely done Kim. When He returns all shall be made whole. Well said.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2025 at 5:25 PM
Amen, Oliver! Thank you!
Puddifoot Avatar
March 9, 2025 at 3:37 PM
brilliant pantoum :) i'm not usually a fan of repetitive forms, or poems that reference religion, but when they're written like this i'm all in! that's testament to your skill
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2025 at 5:24 PM
Thank you so much, Charlotte! XX
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