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To Friendly Face and Open Door

In a moment, in a twinkling of an eye at the last trumpet: for the trumpet shall blow, and the dead shall be raised up incorruptible, and we shall be changed. —1 Cor 15:52 To Friendly Face and Open Door Spring of daffodils and time change, of snowy Bradford pears and I, to friendly face and open door; ecstatic at the doctored lift.* Of snowy Bradford pears and I, an hour that cannot be reclaimed. Ecstatic at the doctored lift. Latter smile on church-countenance. An hour that cannot be reclaimed, and thus the gimp has no inkling. Latter smile on church-countenance. Pain perished in twinkling moment. And thus the gimp has no inkling, saved from the click clack of a clock. Pain perished in twinkling moment, in glory of Great Physician.** Saved, from the click clack of a clock, to friendly face and open door. in glory of Great Physician, Spring of daffodils and time change. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ *lift - elevator and metaphor **Great Physician - Jesus Christ ***non-rhyming pantoum

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Date: 3/13/2025 11:32:00 PM
I hope all your pains are healed! So inspiring and well written. :)
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Date: 3/9/2025 11:04:00 PM
Wonderfully written Kim. Truth in this one...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/10/2025 5:47:00 AM
Thank you, Mike!
Date: 3/9/2025 4:46:00 PM
Nicely done Kim. When He returns all shall be made whole. Well said.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2025 5:25:00 PM
Amen, Oliver! Thank you!
Date: 3/9/2025 4:42:00 PM
Very nice Kim. I'm all for the imminent arrival of the Great Physician. However, not all are in line for healing...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2025 5:24:00 PM
Yes, we pray! Thanks, Tom!
Date: 3/9/2025 3:37:00 PM
brilliant pantoum :) i'm not usually a fan of repetitive forms, or poems that reference religion, but when they're written like this i'm all in! that's testament to your skill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2025 5:24:00 PM
Thank you so much, Charlotte! XX

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