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To Fall To See the Ocean

as i fall to see eternity i rise up and swim to the sky above although i feel there is no sanctity i clearly see it does exist no one calls from the ocean they only look to see...me when i fell below the waters i still rose beyond the sea.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/12/2012 10:18:00 PM
Beautifully written Jesse! To rise above despite adversity - that's what courage and determination entail. Nice! Very nice!
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Jesse Kaler
Date: 11/13/2012 9:00:00 AM
thanks vicky, im glad you liked it

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