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To Fall To See the Ocean

as i fall to see eternity 
i rise up and swim 
to the sky above
although i feel 
there is no sanctity
i clearly see it does exist
no one calls 
from the ocean
they only look 
to see...me
when i fell 
below the 
waters
i still rose 
beyond the
sea.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/12/2012 10:18:00 PM
Beautifully written Jesse! To rise above despite adversity - that's what courage and determination entail. Nice! Very nice!
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Jesse Kaler
Date: 11/13/2012 9:00:00 AM
thanks vicky, im glad you liked it

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