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by by dexter121uk

http://clockwisecat.com/

Down, so many things forced down, they force you look down, lie down, even music tracks “comma, down, doobee down.” The tracks the coyote left in the snow drew my eyes down, the cat is missing. Poor half-bitten stray, already a gimp, I bet he was overcome and went down, down by the riverside down by … Yes, the down-drums, I ain’t going to worry war no more, I ain’t going to worry war no more. Yeah, right— Of course, there are some good downsides when a lover goes down, but all and all, I prefer the upbeat, to the beat-down the suburbs to the downtown. Fisrt Published by Clockwise Cat Jan 2015

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Date: 10/15/2015 11:28:00 PM
An exciting write
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Date: 10/13/2015 10:11:00 AM
DG, We believe in down home here in the South and down, down doggie and wish they would get right down to the bare facts. Great Poem. Jim Horn
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Date: 10/12/2015 4:51:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem.
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