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To Deneen White

d-nyce
i have the privilege of being filthy rich and......
no no no no no
what i really want to say is

Dearest Deneen
Tis nothing to say I love you
Tis nothing to say Be mine
Tis nothing now a days to make
promises to The Allmighty Devine
Tis nothing for me to tell myself 
that I'll love you till the end of time
Tis nothing till I wait for all 
spirals to unwind
all unions to unbind
all joined together to fall apart
the destruction of everything called art
Till I capture the love 
of your soul and heart
I am nothing
not even a spark

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Ali Matheny

Date: 10/20/2008 3:31:00 PM

I'm guessing it's this poem. . . It's really good it explains how your inner feelings for just go everywhere. . . If that makes any sense. . .

John Loving Iii

Date: 9/14/2008 11:04:00 AM

I gotta admit folks this is as good as it gets.

Deneen White

Date: 9/13/2008 12:55:00 PM

hi John I have read this over and over and this will always be my favorite poem, thank you again, take care absolutely beautiful Deneen

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 9/12/2008 8:50:00 AM

Hey John, Got to agree. D-nyce is what NICE is all about. Vince

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/10/2008 9:06:00 AM

Made me chuckle. A nice dedication to D-nyce. God Bless Phyl

James Foulk

Date: 9/7/2008 9:20:00 PM

a very nice dedication to Deneen enjoyed reading it. thank you for reading my poem and for your comment. don't like carrots, well it's that ham hocks that makes it and the onions.

Deneen White

Date: 9/7/2008 2:13:00 PM

very funny Mr. John Loving the third, D-nyce

Karen Feist

Date: 9/7/2008 10:02:00 AM

Holy Cow!! I almost felt a tinge (spark, if you will...) of jealousy. How wonderfully written! You are truly a romantic at heart and your pen is magic. love & peace, Karen

Deneen White

Date: 9/7/2008 8:13:00 AM

Wow! hi John, great write, it touches the heart and it feels nice to have a poem dedicated to one's self, thank you, and for everyone who reads this write, John and I have never met except through our writes, so please don't take this write the wrong way, he wrote this for me, because I wrote a poem entitled the men of poetry soup and he was included in that write, take care D-nyce

Michael Jordan

Date: 9/6/2008 6:21:00 PM

Hi John - Well one things for sure I'll have to check back and read her comment - Outstanding poem just overflowing with a rich abundance of love - The ending was simply amazing - God Bless and good luck

Heidie Buys

Date: 9/6/2008 12:09:00 PM

Sounds like there is a lot of spark. Beautiful love poem. Regards Heidie

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 9/6/2008 10:43:00 AM

I see that I'm not the only one who loves sweets. She may cook you an Epulaeryu, succulent poetic dish. I like the flow of the words and the essence of the poem. Great job and best wishes! ~Joseph

Christy Hardy

Date: 9/6/2008 9:33:00 AM

Written with love, by love, filled with love, and to your love, Always, Christy

Sharon Winter

Date: 9/6/2008 7:46:00 AM

Wow. Beautiful love poem. Good luck! Love, Shar

Maggie Huscroft

Date: 9/6/2008 7:16:00 AM

loving by name and loving by nature.....hope she likes it x maggie

Sean Kelly

Date: 9/6/2008 6:14:00 AM

And only 5 more months, 1 week and 1 day to go to Valentines Day , John...... WOW !!!! Watch this space , folks....